Mama Wants To Know

Started by djbride, May 03, 2010, 09:32:06 AM

Greeny

This is very real and honest songwriting. Great melody and even better lyrics. The performance is direct and uncluttered, and works very well. In a word: powerful!

djbride

Thanks for all the great comments. My vocal is really three vocals tracked together, a couple spots aren't quite in tune and i will fix that. I have an all acoustic version of this and one with drums,bass,electric and acoustic. I couldn't decide which I liked better so I used a combination of the two versions here. This is not a song about me, I have always tried to be a good boy.  :)
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launched

Great tune Dave. It flows nice, with well written lyrics and easy flowing musical delivery.

Right on!

Mark
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Greeny

Quote from: djbride on May 04, 2010, 06:21:12 AMI have always tried to be a good boy.  :)

We all have. Most of the time, lol

Gary F

A very well written song !!! Great vocals!!!
Nice performance Dave!!!
Gary

Ferryman_1957

Very well structured song Dave, the lyrics are very well put together and have a nice twist at the end. The combination of versions works well, it gives the song a very sensitive feel. The vox sound great, if that;s three tracks you did well to sing them so consistently - any "out of tune" bits did not show to me. I like the piano as well. Great stuff!

Cheers,

Nigel

Pamala

good storytellin...like your voice and the guitar sound too.