New Song...At a loss for Lyrics

[OsCKilO]

Very Cool Vocal Jim!!!

You never stop churning out the quality bro!

[Saijinn Maas]

Those drums sound really good. Love the drive and energy of the song.

[Tony W]

Well, you're not missing lyrics now! Well done Jim. How you can turn around a song so quickly is beyond me. I dig it.

[knniggits]

Cool vocals too

[brentusbrutus]

Thanks everyone for your nice comments..
Good effort Jim..
I'm kinda looking for edgyer (how do you spell that?) lyrics, more in the foo Fighters vein.
Will let you all know how it progresses..

Cheers!

[launched]

Cool song with some great rhythm to it.

I liked the vox, Jim.

Mark

[Redler]

Welcome to the forum brentusbrutus! You have written a catchy tune and produced it well! And Jim...excellent vox again!! Fine job guys!!

Kari

[antisocialworker]

its so cool hearing Jim singing to this style
he can sing to anything
great post Brentus'
I love the flow and the changes of this song
I look forward to hearing more from you.

[antisocialworker]

oh yeah
and welcome to songcrafters!

[Oldrottenhead]

Will let you all know how it progresses..

if you are redoing the song leave space in the middle to allow room for a vocal. experiment with panning etc. but if you leave the middle clear it is easier for anyone who wants to try record a vocal tack to hear themselves and get the levels right.

great tune by the way i cant get it out of my head. look forward to hearing where you go with it.