Listen to me (Original - song fragment . . .)

[des0free]

A fragment of my second songwriting attempt . . . I won't have time to finish it anytime soon . . . I wanted something with bass and backing vocals, where I have little experience. I noodled bass, then guitar, vocals, and "lathered, rinsed and repeated" a few times until something started to jell. I bounced and added 2 backing vocals (my first bounce! Wahoo!).

[Geir]

WOW .... You sure take giant steps in your songwriting!!.

From a simple wonderful melodic first song, to a quite complex bass-driven almost trippy tune where a lot is happening in the short fragment you've posted for now.

YOU MUST get time to finish this one !!!!

Amazing des !!! And with the bouncing now mastered the sky's the limit

cheers

[danieldesete]

Come on you have to turn this into a full song. Your sound is amazing... and bouncing all right

[Gary F]

 Cool tune!!Waiting for the rest of it!!
Bouncing opens up a whole new world of possibilities . I just learned how to on my last song "Walk Away".

Gary

[Bluesberry]

Ohhhh yeahhh this is the start of something for sure.  Lots of great songs are written from two or three fragments stuck together.  Keep adding.

[Satchwood]

This sounds very good ~ I want to hear more now, finish er up!!

[Tony W]

Great start on number 2. Fantastic melody, and I love the bass work. I'm not one to want to push people for longer productions, but this left me wanting a whole lot more! I hope you're as excited as I am.

[launched]

I think you are off to a great start here. You must find time to finish, though!

Mark

[Ted]

Wow!  I really want to find out what happens next.  Sounds like it's building up to something big.

[SE]

Sounds great to me Des, great vibe and I love those vox, hope to hear the finished article.