The Apology

[Rata-tat-tat]

Hey Folks... I wrote a really mushy one for the wife. Maybe it'll keep me out of the doghouse for a while.  Anyhow... I listened to it through headphones and it sounded ok... but the when I put it on my computer speakers it sounded like the Vox were too hot. Lemm know what ya think....

V/R
Tod

[lg]

I think the vox sits perfectly Tod!

LG

[OsCKilO]

Awesome Vibe bro!!! Really Love this one.

Electro goodness with a Heartfelt Human factor.....





Vox maybe a little hot on Laptop speakers bro.... but only towards the end of the track ...

It may be because of the Sparse intruments in the music.... The vocal becomes to awesome for the synth...

A Low synth drone or fuzz guitar (one or two notes/chords....Really low) would tie the vox down.. (just towords the end)



Ther Track reminds me of Snow Patrol!!!!

Peace bro


Tharek

[Gary F]

I like it!!This should score you some points with the wife!!!
Vox may be a little loud in places but not much,better than being too low!!!
Good job!!!
Gary

[Tony W]

Cool groove here. I think the vox sit quite well, I'm on cans. I've about given up on the perfect mix, until I got some great advice from Bluesberry.... now I get to start over with my process.

Was this all Kaoss?

[scottieD]

Very cool....I just posted a mushy one for my wife too...what did u do?   Anyway, very cool and synthy...I need a synth now dammit!!  Well done!

[Oldrottenhead]

magic vox sits nicely imho.

[djbride]

Nice song, lyrics and vocals sound fine to me. I hoped this got you out of the dog house.

[Ted]

Vox levels are fine.

It's a nice 80's sound you've got going there.

[Rata-tat-tat]

Cool groove here. I think the vox sit quite well, I'm on cans. I've about given up on the perfect mix, until I got some great advice from Bluesberry.... now I get to start over with my process.

Was this all Kaoss?

Yes... other than my out of key vocals... whew... I can't sing ballads worth a crap. But yes It all started from messing around with the Kaosilator while I was in the doghouse.

Very cool....I just posted a mushy one for my wife too...what did u do?   Anyway, very cool and synthy...I need a synth now dammit!!  Well done!

What did I do??? I defer to the big guy upstairs... he made me the insensitive, emotionally challenged person she speaks of ... I'm just the guy who has to straighten his ass out every once in a while ... or I get it from Mrs. Rat.

Denial... I'm working on it.

I like it!!This should score you some points with the wife!!!
Vox may be a little loud in places but not much,better than being too low!!!
Good job!!!
Gary

Yes... since this song... I am officially out of the doghouse. It freakin worked... Now I'm pissed... All these years and all I had to do was write a gushy ballad. Except for the "Wicked Witch" part I'd say I did a pretty good job of holding that insensitive bastard  at bay.

Awesome Vibe bro!!! Really Love this one.

It may be because of the Sparse intruments in the music.... The vocal becomes to awesome for the synth... Low synth drone or fuzz guitar (one or two notes/chords....Really low) would tie the vox down.. (just towords the end)
Ther Track reminds me of Snow Patrol!!!!

Peace bro


Tharek

Yes I agree>I'm working on another mix. Maybe some electric guitar. Instuments are a little thin on this track. Thanks for the input bro... it means a lot.