Heaven (punkfest original)

[Tony W]

I figured it's time to get out of my comfort zone and post an original, so I got started on it This morning.... 12 hours later here it is. I was too lazy to learn how to program the drums.....

The 2nd verse is definitely written for the forum

All on the MBR

I'm going crazy and I don't know why
I'm sitting here eating some apple pie

baked potatos and some ice cream
I'm in heaven and livin the dream

I could be drinkin in a bar
instead I'm sitting here playing guitar

The bass is coming and I can't lie
I play it so bad that I want to cry

-bridge-

I'm real shocked that your still here
you should have clicked "back" and grabbed a beer

These lyrics are bad and I'll confess
I've never considered wearing a dress

I had big plans when I wrote this song
it was potential but I was wrong

it wont be long and this song's done
one more bridge and a solo run

[OsCKilO]

Talented S.O.B.....


This is So Good that I'm gonna make sure I Kick your Ass if I ever meet you.....

I have listened to this over 20 times now...

It dont get boring!

[launched]

Whooo Hooooo!!! Mighty!

You've lived in Ohio way too long. Akron is written all over this!

Great original piece.

Sweeeeeeeeeeeeet!!!!


Mark

[Redler]

A real good DIY-garage punk song, Tony!! I listened this three times in a row and this is very catchy tune!

Kari

[Bluesberry]

Garage punk, yes, excellent.  Its like an old Stooges song.  Lovely punk guitar solo, perfect touch there.  The only thing I would say here is maybe bring the vocals up just a bit more.  Great punk song Tony.

[Oldrottenhead]

lol gaun yersel tony i deffo hear iggy on backing vocals for sure.

[Geir]

WOW Tony !!!!!!!!!!

Where did this come from You have more than blues inside you for sure !!

This was great!

Fantastic work Tony !!

[Satchwood]

Oh yes, def Garage Punk baby!!  luv it dude!  What an authentic vibe ~ killer, quirky, and just plain enjoyable to listen to!

This is So Good that I'm gonna make sure I Kick your Ass if I ever meet you.....

Well said T!

[SE]

Punk to the max, great vox and guitar , magic.

[j.g.]

Great first post of an original - look forward to hearing some more. The vocal effects are the ideal setting for the lyrics, melody and feel of the song.