"unfamiliar enemy" by AYAN

[ayan0815]

this is my second original song using micro br

vocals: me
guitar: squire
bass: squire with pitch change using audacity
drums: built in

https://www.ebutuoy.com/watch?v=UCFk9H_ZKgw

[SE]

Nice rock,in guitar kinda Motorhead, vox sounds like I,ve heard something similar,but can,t put my finger on it, anyway great job enjoyed it.

[Ted]

Wow.  There's a clever pop song hidden in this hard-driving rocker. (Coming from me, that's a compliment.)  It brought to my mind The Stooges.

I'd like to hear some vocal harmonies on the chorus.

The bass sounds really good too.  All hail Audacity!

Is this all you?  It sounds very live.

[Redler]

I love all these gtr and bass sounds and your voice is perfect on this tune. The song is well written...Gooood work!

Kari

[Gary F]

 Really cool driving rocker!!Great vocals and playing!!
 Good job Ayan!!
  Gary

[ayan0815]

thanks everyone for the nice compliment. i intend to write some more song on my mbr. im still learning how to record on this nifty device.

@ted. yes this is all me. i might have put a little too much reverb or maybe its the live mix effect on the mastering mode. il proly do some harmonies on my next song, btw.

[Nelson]

Sweet tune, It really rocks.  You can turn the vocals up a bit, in the mix.
Loved it and looking forward to hearing more from you.

-Nelson

[SwanSong]

AGREE with all above comments. this rocks.
wonderful work . and also agee vocals could b
turned or mixed up a notch..otherwise great sound
enjoyed the listen .....................tc Neil..............

Please listen to my latest post
I JUST WANT TO DANCE WITH YIOU
thanks !!

[chapperz66]

I've just been caught headbanging again - but fortunately only by my son this time.  My wife and daughter give me hell.

Good stuff Ayan.

Paul   

[Tony W]

Yep, I'm ready to go for the day. This sets the pace for a busy, hard packed day. Ted's got a great point, you could actually peel the onion and turn this into a pop song. Very unique. Don't get me wrong, I dig it as a heavy rocker.

Fine song man!