Next Time by Nelson // It's coming along slowly

[Nelson]

Hey guys here's the latest version. Still working the ending.
let me know what you think.

-Nelson

Title: NEXT TIME
By Nelson
©Copyright 2009 by Nelson
Verse 1
I watch her as she walks on by,
everyday, at about this time.
When the sun refuses to shine,
Out of jealousy....

And I tell myself it's gonna be your day,
It's time to step up to the plate.
Made up my mind, just in time,
to see her walking away.

Bridge:
So don't live your life
waiting, for tomorrow.
Cause tomorrow is promised
 to anyone.
If there's something in your heart,
set it free.
And prevent yourself this pain
and misery.

Chorus
Well I guess next time, I won't wait so long,
to make up my mind to carry on.
I heard time waits for no man,
somewhere in some old song.

All though life can be such a jagged little pill,
You grit your teeth and enjoy the thrill
And if miss the moon you're still,
among the stars.

Verse 2
Got a message just the other day.... an old friend has passed away.
We hadn't been in touch..... for quite sometime.

I wish that I had made the call,
had a beer and discuss it all.
good friends are......so hard... to find.

Repeat Bridge and Chorus  
Music break and repeat Chorus

[Tony W]

This song seemed familiar, but it's evolved so much. I really like this version Nelson. Fantastic. I wouldn't change a thing.

[Bluesberry]

Fantastic song Nelson, fantastic.  Your vocals are deadly, that chorus is super fine.  Guitars are really rocking.  Nice piano.  Its great just the way it is.

[six harvest]

Hi Nelson,

good Song, good feeling and expression...

Regards,

Six HArvest

[Tangled Wires]

Killer song Nelson and that chorus is something else!

Loved the first version you posted, and this is even better.

[SwanSong]

Nelson great song great voice...never heard the original of this u did
but great sound. there s also a bit of Allman Bros sound here great job

[Oldrottenhead]

it just gets better and better, but i said it before will say it again, what a voice,

man i would pay to hear you sing the names and numbers in the phonebook nelson you have one helluva voice love it love it love it.

[Krasi]

Great performance. Very strong vocals indeed. Liked it a lot.

[launched]

Yes - I love it, Nelson! You got this to the point where it all comes down to symantics and personal opinion, and that is tough to do. Well done, great job!

Mark

[Satchwood]

Great song ~ great lyrics ~ great voice !!  Cool guitar and piano playing!