Give Me Back My Peace Of Mind - original

[djbride]

For the past few days I have been working on 2 different love songs and I needed a break today so I wrote and recorded a "I Hate You" song. Just to balance things out 
Simple rock song and you will be able to tell why I don't play lead guitar.

     

           Give Me Back My Peace Of Mind

Life, they say is a long hard full of twists and turns,
Along the way you need to find someone to share it with,

When I met you, I thought you were what I was waiting for,
But I ain't no fool, you been sleeping around with every man in town,

             (chorus)
You better pack your things and go,
I can't take it no more,
Don't let the door hit your behind
And give me back my peace of mind,


Love, they say is a wonderful thing worth fighting for,
And I know someday I will find my love but baby it ain't you,

             chorus

             chorus

[SwanSong]

Hi dj
Fabbulous song great lyrics and good classic sound .
in one post u said u dont sing well . well in my opinion
and im sure other .s you re voals r great and ea song
is perfect for your range. love the guitar work on this.
looking forward to our collaboratio. how is that going
take care Neil ............................................

An honor to have the first post on this song....!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Redler]

Very nice pop rock song, djbride! I like that powerful chord proggression. You have written and performed a catchy tune!

 - Kari

[Ted]

I think the sentiments in this song are an entire pop sub-genre.  Well done.

I like how the riff is are assertive, but not angry. Perfectly matches the lyrics. Although I wouldn't call this an "I hate you" song.  The attitude is more matter-of fact: "I'm done. Enough is enough."  Which makes it even more nuanced than an "I hate you" song.

You've motivated me to dredge up an old song of mine in the same vein.

[OsCKilO]

This is Superb!!!!!

Catchy Strong Song....


The Lyrics and Melody are Too resolved to be angry... Which makes this more appealing to me....


Very Great Stuff Bro!!




Peace

T(OsCKilO)

[Geir]

It's a hit !!!

great song !!

[Ferryman_1957]

Yup, this has hit written all over it! Really gutsy riffs the sound made me think Free/ Bad Co, there's areally nice warm sound to the drums and guitars - what did you record this on? Don't worry about the lead guitar - if you can't shred like a hooligan, play something that fits the song and I think that solo works great. The vox are great as well.

My only suggestion would be to spread the guitars in the mix a bit more, but it sounds great as it is. Really enjoyed this, great rocker!

Cheers,

Nigel

[SE]

Great rocker love that riff, really nice sounding, as the Ferryman says pan the guitar further apart should make it sound better other than that, it,s a really good rocker.

[Gritter]

Totally cool...you rock in the best way my mang!

[Oldrottenhead]

another great song dj keep em coming