Staring out of my window

[bannybassman]

It occurred to me the other day that I hadn't posted a proper original song of mine on this site, which is terrible on my part!
Anyway, here is one I wrote a while back, but recorded fairly recently, it's a little rough around the edges, but I'm fairly pleased with it.
It's called "Staring out of my window"
Enjoy, and as always, leave any comments or suggestions.

[lg]

Vox needs to come up in the mix.
Difficult to hear the words....
Sounds good otherwise.

LG

[djbride]

Good song, I really like the vocal but you need to bring up the volume, you have a nice voice so make it the main thing in the mix, nice harmonies on the last chorus. Solid lyrics. Nice job.

[Nelson]

Sound great. I agree with Lg and djbride, bring up the vocals and you got it.
Well Done, my friend

-Nelson