Can't you see? - Jemima's Kite boys

[Vanncad]

Sweet tune Flash (and the boys).

I love the intro and that thumping bass line.
The spoken parts really add to the vibe of the tune.

Iagreee, the vox can come up a bit, but other than that it sounds pretty cool to me.

[Bluesberry]

Flash is doing a Flea here.  Great Brit-rock going on here.

[Blooby]

Love the John Entwistle pop to start off the bass.

Great tune, guys.

I think the second guitar detracts from the vocals a bit.  Would rather it be featured in a solo.  Just my two cents.

Downloaded to the hard drive.

Excellent.

Blooby

[Migs]

I like.

[SwanSong]

Now this is taking contemporary rock with the old rock  n roll
and giving it a new flavor. just fabulous. felt the voice was
drowned a little bit. could have been clearer. but over all
this song is a Rocker...take care Neil...............................

[Satchwood]

Great rockin song JK!!  Catchy singing, very cool bass line, and full-bore rockin guitar!

[Ted]

Great driving song! I agree that the vocals are a bit low in the mix.

Flash!  You got the memo about turning up the bass!  Sounds great.

[Tangled Wires]

Stonking song, and that bass was just too good!!

Would agree with the other comments that it would be nice for the vocals to be brought up a tad, but that doesn't detract from the fact that this, in my opinion, is one of the finest songs posted on this site for some time.

[Oldrottenhead]

okay heres more vocals lol. still needs a few tweaks tho

[Ferryman_1957]

It starts a bit Who ish, in a very good way and then rocks off to infinity. At last the bass isn't too quiet, and I LOVE that bass line Mike, it really is quite Entwistle-y with lots of clever little runs and I like the way the slappy/poppy bits cut through. This is another great song, still don't know how you keep churning them out, it just grows on every listen. Definitely going in my JK collection.

Not sure which version I prefer. Agree the first one has the vox a bit low but in the second the vox are crowding the bass a bit. May have to have both of them!

Cheers,

Nigel