Wrong road (lyrics and music by Lexman)

[lexman]

Hi,

Probably my best song so far.
Personal I am very enthausiastic, the build up, the break, the backing vocal during chorus after break.
For details my advice is to listen with a headphone. (guitar part during verse on one ear for the atmosphere)

Story behind the song is that sometimes a your live can be completely different then
what you've expected, lost everything (not personal  )


Lyrics: Wrong road.

verse1:
Time rolls by
Seven days
Got no home
Fifty-two weeks

chorus:
That was not the thing I've planned
Not what I had in mind
This is not my kind of life.
My kind of life

verse2:
Time rolls by
Seven days
Got no home
Fifty-two weeks
Walk through the streets
Every day
Searching for better
Twenty-four hours

chorus:
That was not the thing I've planned
Not what I had in mind
This is not my kind of life.
My kind of life

bridge:
Can you hear me
I am screaming out loud
Can you see me
Reach me your hand

chorus 2x:
That was not the thing I've planned
(I took the wrong road)
Not what I had in mind
This is not my kind of life.
(I took the wrong road)
My kind of life

[Redler]

Very powerful performance, lexman! I like the composition - I'm humming it now after listening. This is a very nice e-guitar/powerpop tune. Liked the arrangement, too!

 - Kari

[Oldrottenhead]

great post lexman

[Satchwood]

Cool song ~ great layered guitars and build up!!  well done singing & song writing, and my kind of ending!  I also like your bridge build up to your final chorus.

[Geir]

Really cool song.

Very good arrangement.

great post !!

[Vanncad]

Cool song Lexman!

I really dig the crushing guitar tone you got going on here.
You've got some good harmonies too!

Good job man!

p.s. - I love the pick slide at the end 

[Rickocaster]

Cool song, though the lyrics are kind of sad. Hope you find your "kind of life".  Love the way it builds toward the end, and I really like the clean arpeggio. It also has a cool slow groove.

[Nelson]

Nice arrangement and great guitar work.
Outstanding vocals and lyrics
Well done...
-Nelson

[lexman]

Cool song, though the lyrics are kind of sad. Hope you find your "kind of life".  Love the way it builds toward the end, and I really like the clean arpeggio. It also has a cool slow groove.

Don't worry about me...
I am having a great live,great job, lovely woman and 2 nice kids.
I've tried to 'transfer' me into the head of a man who had
everything but he lost it all.

[Rickocaster]

Don't worry about me...
I am having a great live,great job, lovely woman and 2 nice kids.
I've tried to 'transfer' me into the head of a man who had
everything but he lost it all

Well you did a great job of it!  I was about to send you some flowers!  I love songs that get in people's heads and express raw emotions. Very insightful work, my friend.