Improved--Another song for the kids

[visiblemember]

The only thing I did was re-record the two guitars and arranged the drums. Sounds like I got away with it pretty well. Sometimes the MicroBR drums seem limiting. It's my own fault for putting that half speed bridge in there. Alas, I'm compelled to do so and then I'm stuck trying to make it all fit together. That's bridges though. I've heard thousands of pop songs with some totally out of place bridge thrown in as if it was the only choice they had. It's still my new favorite song. Enjoy.
Thom

[flyon90]

I'm jealous, I wish I could sing.  Song structure sounds alright to me not too jumbled not too structured.

[Gnasty]

The start sounds like Sugar Ray to me actually. Good job!

[Tony W]

I think its a fantastic song. The playing is superb, Your voice is to die for.

[IanR]

Man, you more than got away with it.  You did a great job.  Very polished.

[Geir]

I couldn't even start typing before this song was over .... loved it to much !!

Great song and excellent performance.

[Gritter]

I really love this...a great song, top notch and awesome singing, playing and all around feel. Very clear vocal - sounds pro...indie gold!

[visiblemember]

Thanks for all the positive feedback. It's a cute song, isn't it. Sure hope the kids like it.

[Saijinn Maas]

That was really cool! It DID sound a bit like Sugar Ray in the beginning, but with lyrics that actually makes sense

Great job on the drum track too!

[Pipes]

A real foot tapper...which is rare these days..

nice  tune there...like it...