another song for the school kids-- Demo2

[visiblemember]

Been working on this on for another English project. Pro-English propaganda!

I hope I can get some more time soon to straighten it out. I know it's a mess in the middle.

[launched]

This is really good - I like the overlayed guitars.

Mark

[Tony W]

Great guitar work, and you've got killer vocals. I really enjoyed the listen, Thanks!

[SwanSong]

great song...!!!!!!
AGREE with al the above and more.
a big thumbs up . this song rocks.!
take care NEIL ........................

[OsCKilO]

This is Superb!!!!!!

love the guitars!!!!

very cool vocal as well!!!

The kids Should love it!

Great Work!

[visiblemember]

Hey thanks, all. I'm not sure if it'll put them to sleep.
It is more mellow than the Nessie Friendship Song. After I fix the vocals and set a good rhythm slash or two in the that middle bridge, it'll be a sweet dance tune. Oh, yeah. I've got to get my lazy a** to write out the drums. Jeez, I gotta a lot to do still.   

[Rickocaster]

Smart AND entertaining!  Love the way the guitars and vocals weave together. I think you've got something here!  Can't wait to hear it after you tweak the stuff you mentioned.  Enjoyed it!

[Oldrottenhead]

this is magic, your pupils must love you.

[henwrench]

Stunningly good tune here. Love it. Will be very interested to hear this one finished.

                                             henwrench

[cuthbert]

It doesn't sound like a mess in the middle to me. A real toe-tapper - fine job, vm!