OH my heat..by Neil Swanson cp2010 (b.m.i)

[SwanSong]

Another original song i wrote this week . a bit rough in parts but wanted to get feedback
i think it has great potential . and of course my partner will b doing lyics and vocals .on
all son.s re geoff..the elvis guy..lo..We have declared ourselves as anew songwriting team
and working feverishly to put an album together. all the music sites. i network with love
our songs. and i think we have a future ahead. of us ..hope u like it take care Neil.................

ps..dont forget i have no musicala experience or training. these are given talents by u know
who..im trying to make a go at the music industry and now have over 11.000 followers.
between the five music sites now again thanks..........................................................

[SteveB]

SSG - Hmm. Well you must have been well to the front of the queue when 'you know who' dished out the putative talent.    This is quite a catchy little arrangement, which has the potential to be embellished into something more-than-decent with a good lyric & vocal. I wish you well with the project.

[OsCKilO]

Great Job!!!

Well Done!!!!!!!!!!!

[Flash Harry]

There's a film score in here.

Nice one.

[Satchwood]

Nice, mellow, and easy listening tune - nice!!  I like the melody - definitely got potential that's for sure!

[Groundy]

Great job well done swansong.

[SwanSong]

THANKS all for the great comments. we will b embillishing this with vocals.i have been
told much of my music is movie type music. have been told i shouldgo into the movie
score writing. lo. would not know where to begin on that lol..just grateful for the comments
and appreciation. many thanks NEIL ...................................................................