My Serpent Heart (for Gringo)

Started by henwrench, February 23, 2010, 02:59:23 PM

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Not finished. Vocals are cack.

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Tangled Wires

Vocals are quiet not cack!! Would love to hear them clearer and louder as this sounds a bloody fantastic song, with a great melody throughout


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Gringo would be proud!

Great tune.... 

Great (But Quiet) Vocal...
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Oldrottenhead

shit i thought i left a tap running.
i cant hear no words why i no hear no words just a tap running in the room next.

this is i good song but not for play in taxi, passenger people might think door open or mad hen driving in a puddle.

i need to pee.
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Oldrottenhead

whit goes oan in ma heid



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"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of."
- Robert Schumann

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I love the music. I do think you need to do something with the vox, but not sure what - But they are right for the song.

It does make me want to whip up a pork roll egg and cheese for some strange reason, though...
"Now where did I put my stream of thought. But hey, fc*K it!!!!!!! -Mokbul"
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Awesome! Now, if you could only hear the vox.. :)

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Quote from: oldrottenhead on February 23, 2010, 03:21:06 PMshit i thought i left a tap running.
i cant hear no words why i no hear no words just a tap running in the room next.

this is i good song but not for play in taxi, passenger people might think door open or mad hen driving in a puddle.

i need to pee.
Well said Jim, spoken like a true Gringo.  We are all a little bit of Gringo now, he is fully inside each of us.  Like the shooting star that exploded last night, so we are all a little spark of Gringo's greatness.  I feel you Gringo, you won't ever leave me now.

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