My Serpent Heart (for Gringo)

Started by henwrench, February 23, 2010, 02:53:36 PM

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henwrench

February 23, 2010, 02:53:36 PM


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Sparkling stars and longer sorrow
   Only to be borrowed
   Hang on Thorns and shadow tone
   Tender life with two alone

   O my serpent heart
   O my worm and far
   O my serpent heart's for you
   My Love

   So am I as rich the sky
   The blooms are full, deep a dye
   Being Your slave and time decays
   My dumb thoughts, your sun's ray's

   CH

   If I wake not be distraught
   All of this will come to nought
   Dash out my desp'rate brains
   Pluck the mangled man insane

   CH

                                    henwrench
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Oldrottenhead

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February 23, 2010, 03:22:15 PM
thats better i cant hear the taps running
whit goes oan in ma heid



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Bluesberry

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February 23, 2010, 05:27:08 PM
I really like these lyrics, poetry 'tis. 

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Satchwood

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February 28, 2010, 10:24:24 AM
Very poetic lyrics Mark - deep stuff! 

"Dash out my desp'rate brains
 Pluck the mangled man insane"
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Maverick31

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February 28, 2010, 07:42:05 PM
I'm liking the lyrics. You have a very familiar written style... can't think of it right now though. I'm pretty sick right now, I think I need a cleaner head for deeper thinking.

Anyways, very solid lyrics... flows great!
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