Fallen Angel (in the glass)

[Mach]

I wrote this song a long, long time ago and it has gone through many changes, arrangements & genres to find the right feel for it. This is about a woman battling an alcohol addiction.


Fallen Angel (in the glass)
(Chords) E B C#min A (These are the only 4 uesd and played with various licks/fills)
                                      

Living through your struggle
You're crowned Queen of the day
Looking in the mirror
You always have your say
Those who know you
Their judgment shouldn't pass
The final verdict's staring from the glass

(Chorus)
Another angel fallen, down with broken wings
Another soul forgotten, lost all of her dreams
And no pity for her, down with fallen tears
And the devil's feeding, as she's starving on her fear

People may refer you
A person of place
The reflection may disturb you
If you can't look her straight in the face
Some may praise you
Have your back
But the problem at hand still remains a fact.

(Chorus)
(Break/solo)
(Chrous)

[lg]

I enjoyed this very much.
Very nicely produced song.

LG

[launched]

Yes, this is a good one! Natural sound - Tough to get that.

Mark

[SE]

Really nice tune with great vox, really enjoyed this  ,great listen.

[Gary F]

  A well rounded performance ! Very good mix.Really good song!
Great voice!!

                 Gary

[Bluesberry]

I really like the many guitars, all mixed in very nice.  This is a great rocking song.  I have a slight problem with that drum fill that comes around every so often, it feels out of place, timing is weird or something, and I find it distracts me from the rest going on.  Really good songwriting.

[Oldrottenhead]

i like this one its a great song, lots going on but drums are too intrusive and distracting.

[Facemask93]

Mach , this is a bloody great song , great structure , lovely guitar fills , dont have a priblem at all with the drums , could you post the lyrics , and if possible the chords , i'm the third listen , and have to say , i love the way you have done this song , the harms are subtle but very effective , wow , this is a great example of how to put a song together , 5*****.


Rob

[Mach]

Hey thanks everyone. I used to do this song years ago live but in a totally different format. It was faster, different chords, and an all together different structure.

I have a slight problem with that drum fill that comes around every so often, it feels out of place, timing is weird or something, and I find it distracts me from the rest going on.  Really good songwriting.

i like this one its a great song, lots going on but drums are too intrusive and distracting.

Yes, I know that fill very well. It has also drove me crazy at times. I have been meaning to change that for some time but never gotten around to it. There are some other things I would like to change also. I'm just an Eventual Procrastinator.

[Mach]

Mach , this is a bloody great song , great structure , lovely guitar fills , dont have a priblem at all with the drums , could you post the lyrics , and if possible the chords , i'm the third listen , and have to say , i love the way you have done this song , the harms are subtle but very effective , wow , this is a great example of how to put a song together , 5*****.


Rob

Thanks Rob...Done!