Fallen Angel (in the glass)

Started by Mach, February 19, 2010, 08:05:10 AM

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Satchwood

#10
February 19, 2010, 12:05:36 PM
Nice song ~~ well played and song!!  Great lyrics too!

"And the devil’s feeding, as she’s starving on her fear" - great line~!
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Saijinn Maas

#11
February 19, 2010, 12:08:42 PM
This was great! Blues is right about the fill, but everything else was right on! Vox fit perfect, loved the background harmonies, nice southern rock vibe going there. I liked it a lot!

Tony W

#12
February 19, 2010, 12:10:58 PM
Great song, very well put together, and the drums wouldn't have bothered me until I read it...... LOL. Excellent lyrics. I enjoyed the listen Mach.


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Vanncad

#13
February 19, 2010, 04:02:48 PM
Geez Mach,

I love this tune. Reminds me of the Stones man.
I think it's the drums that give it that feeling.

Great lyrics, vox, guitars, harmonies, everything!

Good job man!
It ain't pretty being easy.

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Geir

#14
February 20, 2010, 06:11:12 AM
WOW WOW man this is goot !!! Love it !

I don't have problems with the drums either, but would maybe take the down just a tad in the mix and maybe try another take at the bass and hitting a note on every bassdrum kick (just something I learned from my drummer brother that works well in most cases, I'm no bassplayer :) )

But still a great song .... GREAT song !!!
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OsCKilO

#15
February 20, 2010, 06:40:52 AM
A Supreme Example of Freaking Awesome Songwriting and Performance!!!!!

The Mix is Amazing through My Lap top Speakers.

Drums seem a tiny bit loud on the Head phones...  But it is a Hard one to call because my Cans are a bit bass heavy.........

This is an Awesome Song!!

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Torren61

#16
February 20, 2010, 07:50:18 AM Last Edit: February 20, 2010, 07:52:36 AM by Torren61
Good song.  Reminds me of "Angel" by Hendrix for some reason.

lemgandi

#17
February 20, 2010, 08:26:21 AM
Nice. I'd rework the lines "Those who know you
Their judgment shouldn't pass", mostly 'cause as written it's confusing. But that might be the professional prose writer talkin'.

bannybassman

#18
February 20, 2010, 11:31:33 AM
Really nice, love the tune!
The drums are a bit intrusive, but maybe just turning it down a bit in the mix when fills come around would help??
But even so it's a great song!
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Ferryman_1957

#19
February 20, 2010, 12:46:21 PM
Great song, drums are just about Ok for me , perhaps some of the fills are a little too busy and lose the timing a bit but nothing major. Great arrangement of the guitars and the vox and lyrics are really good. I enjoyed this a lot.

Cheers,

Nigel
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