Evil Inside - lyrics by Mavrick31

Started by holdempok, February 08, 2010, 06:42:39 PM

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Rata-tat-tat

#10
February 08, 2010, 10:56:57 PM
Wow... that just flat out kicks some major ass guys. Well done.

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Satchwood

#11
February 09, 2010, 07:58:10 AM
Fantastic singing and arrangment on Mav's way cool lyrics!!  I really like how you did the last verse - very cool!

Your version is completely different then the version that I did a few weeks ago...check here if you'd like to hear it:

https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=5922.0
www.reverbnation.com/Satchwood
www.myspace.com/Satchwood
www.soundclick.com/Satchwood

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Oldrottenhead

#12
February 09, 2010, 08:17:47 AM
this is powerful stuff
whit goes oan in ma heid



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holdempok

#13
February 09, 2010, 09:20:12 AM
Thanks guys. Didn't know Satchwood did it already. Going to listen now.
Why don't we do it on the road?

launched

#14
February 09, 2010, 09:29:31 AM
Yes!! This song kicks total ass!

Mark
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#15
February 09, 2010, 09:30:43 AM
Yeah great...love the vocals and the lyrics...Dude can sing!  Nice work!




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   Okay to cover...not sure why you'd want to though...

Wiley

#16
February 09, 2010, 10:07:27 AM
Two great takes on the same set of lyrics!!  How awesome is that!!  Great job to all 3 of you!!
PJ

Bluesberry

#17
February 09, 2010, 11:16:45 AM
Holy crap brother, this is incredible.  You have brought the words to life in a  big way.  This is a huge hit on your hands guys.  Great colab here.  I agree with the Kings of Leon comparisons.  This one is radio bound.

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#18
February 09, 2010, 11:25:45 AM
I'm telling you guys, everyone here has my blessing to take any of my poems/lyrics in order to create a song. It's really a true honor that you very talented musicians even think my words are any good, let alone song worthy. It really means more to me than you could know.
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holdempok

#19
February 09, 2010, 11:55:32 AM
You really have a way of putting words together. Story telling in away. I would love it if you could attempt an uplifter. ie happy ending, my wish finally came true, loey dovey. or

on the rock side. ie partying hard, kicking some ass, chasing the girls. the way she looks is driving me crazy...etc.
guess you can't tell I'm an 80's guy huh?  :P

keep me posted.

HP
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