Gone Shopping - Song A Week 2010-5

Started by T.C. Elliott, February 01, 2010, 04:43:02 AM

T.C. Elliott

Some of you may find this one familiar. This song starts off with the EXACT same melody as My first Song A Week "Heartache in a Bottle." So much for originality.

I finished this up early this morning and ate breakfast. It wasn't till I came back that I realized I had stolen from myself.

Gone Shopping – T.C. Elliott

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You said you were going to the store
You were coming back in a minute
Hours later and you're not here
It's an empty bed without you in it

You've been gone the whole damn evening
I don't know where you've been
It doesn't matter anymore
What kind of trouble you're in

I feel. I feel so bad.
I feel. I feel so bad.
You left me all alone
Out here on my own

If you come back to me this evening
I will hold you in my arms
I feel lost when you're not here
So let me keep you from harm

I feel. I feel so bad.
I feel. I feel so bad.
You left me all alone
Out here on my own

© 2010 T.C. Elliott
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Redler

This is an awesome tune. You really keep excellent level on your "song/week"-challenge.

So beautiful melody and well presented! The gtr solo was very fine idea and you played it well with good sounds. Goooood Work!

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Good song, good recording. excellent vox.


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lg

Another good song.
What I really liked the best about this song,
is the expression in your vox during the chorus!!!!
Bravo.

LG
 
nothing is real... So theres nothing to get hung about!

Wiley

 :D  My question is  Did she ever come back??  Maybe next week how she comes home to you and how you feel !!   :D ;)    Sounds good!

SE

Really liked this one the guitar sounds really great and the vox a really superb, look forward to your song next week.
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Oldrottenhead

keeping up the standard pf great vox on this.
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I like this - Keep up the good work!

Mark

P.S. - I think you could pull this off - Sweet!
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stuart3645

this is just way too catchy, cant wait for your next one, great job...