End of the Road

[Maverick31]

End of the Road



Tormented by the thoughts in my mind,
Left in a comatose state...
Broken by the choke hold of life,
How can one live in this vacant shell?

Lost in thoughts,
consuming my sick head...
No pride, no strength, cause my emotional state...
Only one inevitable fate.

Once was worthy, now a disgrace...
In eternal agony, misery my only place,
Please take my burning pain away.
Can this cruel reality be true?

Soul is bleeding, heart soaked in tears.
Loneliness, despair, disappointment, my only friend.
Hope, salvation, and serenity, out of mind.
No way out, abandoned soul must be set free.

The end must be...

[Nelson]

Another good one and your writing is constantly improving .
Keep it up.

-Nelson

[Maverick31]

Thanks man... it's been a while since I've tried to write, I'll have to make another attempt.

[bannybassman]

nice words man!
If a get time I might try to put some music to them

[Maverick31]

nice words man!
If a get time I might try to put some music to them

Shoot man, if you find the time go for it!

[bannybassman]

I've done it! See the result in the originals section, hope you like it!!
 

[Maverick31]

Thanks man, I'll check it right now...