Evil Inside

[Maverick31]

Evil inside

Look in my eyes there's evil inside
you runaway fast, but where will you hide?
Take my hand there's nothing to fear
if you don't want my love then why are you here?

The thoughts inside my head will explode
Pull them all out before I grow cold
you say that it's over but how did we start?
These foolish games are breaking my heart

Where is the touch that chills my skin?
I want to feel her but love sometimes hurts
Tell me the lies so I won't feel the pain
When you release me I'm falling again

My mind is wandering, the evil brain
But in your eyes my thoughts are insane
It's time to decide, I know the price
when she comes near her touch cold as ice

She touches my spine I shiver with lust
then she turns me away and I cry in her dust
But when she's gone there's no cold hand
The loneliness kills me with a pain I can't stand

But the pain must continue, will it ever go?
Till it starts all over we'll never know
and if she comes calling, can I keep being strong?
The days are useless and the nights are gone...

[Facemask93]

I've got to say i like this poem , it has a great feel of reallity about it , and i'm hoping to transfer that feel to a song , i've started to record it recently , i just hope i can do it justice , well done Maverick , you sure know how to write words that make you think


Rob

[Maverick31]

I've got to say i like this poem , it has a great feel of reallity about it , and i'm hoping to transfer that feel to a song , i've started to record it recently , i just hope i can do it justice , well done Maverick , you sure know how to write words that make you think


Rob

Thanks man, I really appreciate it! I'm a first time writer, so I'm a bit shocked that I've had so many positive responses.
Feel free to do your take on it. Keep in mind that most of the earlier work I posted was just set up for poetry, not lyrics... but if changed are needed, feel free.

[holdempok]

here ya go Mav. Just took my Acoustic alverz on twangerster effect layed down 1 track then added vox. hope you like. I'll post it in originals too.