Vele bianche - 1st MBR recording

[kumale]

Hi all,
this is a song i composed about a trip on a sailing ship
(vele bianche = white sails).
It really needs some more job,
but i was so happy to post the first song here!

I didn't make a lot of mixing / mastering, just bounced tracks because it was a first try but: listening mp3 on other device than mbr is really different (too many bass on some player... but it seemed to me right during recording... ??)

So... I'm looking forward to any advice!

[henwrench]

You're gonna win a lot of fans with this. Brilliant, all sounded very good to me. Very accomplished playing and singing....WOW!!!

                                               henwrench

[Torren61]

Musica piacevole.  Eseguito bene.

[Tony W]

Excellent song. You have a beautiful voice. I don't understand a word, but I don't care. Its lovely to listen to.

[Wiley]

Very well done and welcome to the forum!!  You sing and play very well!!  Great listen and if you have questions many here are willing to help!!
PJ

[cuthbert]

Hi kumale,

It didn't sound too bassy to me, but I am listening on my computer speakers.

Great first post!

-cuth

[Gritter]

I love it! Everything sounds just right...I really like the bass in the verses...has an african sound then goes into something else that works so well...an absolutely beautiful song.

[Satchwood]

Beautifully sung and played !!  Nice friendly sounding voice and light-hearted vibe!

I also like some of your creative guitar parts as well!

[Gnasty]

Very beautiful voice indeed. Sounds completely great from my house 

[Oldrottenhead]

WOW