"Evil Inside" (lyrics Maverick31, music & vox Satchwood)

Started by Satchwood, January 24, 2010, 08:51:27 PM

Maverick31

I'd also like someone here to see if they can make a song using these lyrics...
https://songcrafters.org/community/index.php?topic=5910.0

Even if the words need to be tweeked a bit.
"If I can't be my own, I'd feel better dead."
-Layne Staley

Maverick31

Woops, I also wanted to point out that your voice sounded outstanding... especially for this type of song. I don't think I would really want you to change that, it fit perfectly.
The more I hear you sing, the better you get... and right now, I'm very impressed!

Great job once again!

-Justin (aka, Maverick31)
"If I can't be my own, I'd feel better dead."
-Layne Staley

Tony W

Well done to the both of you. Satch that sick guitar work is off the hook. Keyboard bass player huh? The bass was really good. Your vocals have impressed me lately. It takes a lot of guts to sing. You're taking the bull by the horns there and letting loose. That's awesome.


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Maverick31

Quote from: Tony W on January 25, 2010, 11:44:29 AMWell done to the both of you. Satch that sick guitar work is off the hook. Keyboard bass player huh? The bass was really good. Your vocals have impressed me lately. It takes a lot of guts to sing. You're taking the bull by the horns there and letting loose. That's awesome.
Yeah, his vocals are awesome! Once I get the cash together, I'll be buying what I need to post up my vocal ability (inability), lol. I mean, one day I'd at least like to sing my own lyrics (if my voice permits it).
But so far, people making songs using my lyrics is so wonderful, it's just amazing... I never thought I'd be any good as a writer.
"If I can't be my own, I'd feel better dead."
-Layne Staley

Bluesberry

Insane and great at the same time.  Great to hear your singing voice Tommy.  Lots to like about the vocals, keep singing man.  What a guitar workout.

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Maverick31

Maybe we could even get a touch of metal in there, with piano?
There are a lot of possibilities... who knows, maybe acoustic?
"If I can't be my own, I'd feel better dead."
-Layne Staley

Tony W



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Very Cool!!  Rockin Dokkenlike Tune!!  Vocals sound great and
Guitar Rippin is On fire as usual!

JFJ  Jim from Jersey
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Maverick31

Quote from: Tony W on January 25, 2010, 12:47:02 PMhttp://cgi.ebay.com/BOSS-MICRO-BR-Digital-Recorder-Multi-track-Recorder_W0QQitemZ350307111180QQcmdZViewItemQQptZLH_DefaultDomain_0?hash=item518fee510c

The deals are out there Justin! All you need to do is jump on and catch the train. Out of curiosity, do you play any instruments?

Nope, never played any. I would like to become a singer if my vocals turn out to be okay... and continue creating lyrics. I seriously wrote my first 7 lyrics/poems in two days... then I wrote another one yesterday (I think).
I've never written poetry in my life, so this was a first for me, and I was seriously suprised that people liked what I wrote. Of course I must learn things about how to structure lyrics, because I have know idea. But it's a start. For me this is my new emotional release... before it was racing cars, but that got me into a bit of trouble, so this seems like a better outlet. Besides, I've always felt seriously passionate about music... especially music that lyrically touches me.
"If I can't be my own, I'd feel better dead."
-Layne Staley