"Ribbon" :- Spoken Word Track - Osckilo & Kevin Love

[OsCKilO]

This is a spoken Word Track....





Out with a friend tonight.....



Kevin Love..... Math Teacher......



Kevin Does the vocals and lyrics.....





First Time Kevin tried to lay his Poetry to music......





Funny...   The Poem is about  "Love".....


First for me in terms of Music......






Kev is An East London Poet......

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The Piece is about a "New Love".....

He wrote the words.... The Music came After.....


Awesome Night Out!!!!   Sam Jeffreys was there as well!!!

Let us know what you think.....

Kev May be  (Well is....) a part of osckilo Now....



Peace all....


I hope you (well She .... Wink, Wink....... ).... likes it......




Tharek and Kevin



This is called "Ribbon"

Be Gentle...  New Genre....

[Wiley]

This is going to take several hearings to get all the lyrics, they are so intense. I think it is beautiful.  I admit with the accents would be nice to have the lyics posted, but if not will just inspire one to listen over and over again until they gt them all.  This is your best ever!!!
PJ

[OsCKilO]

Best ever!!!!??!!!


Really?


I'll Post The Lyrics when Sober

Lol

[Tony W]

the poem alone is fantastic, doing it with music is magical. great playing T, it fits so well together.
One hell of a mood created. Storm chaser, and you're the perfect storm... great line.

this deserves pics



OOPS Wrong link

[launched]

This is the fine dining of forum music - Love it! A cool direction you are going in.

Mark

[kevin_love]

Hi All,

Thanks for the really nice comments. Tharek is cool!

Here are the lyrics...

Yeah
When I first saw you I thought you were stunning
Unintentionally beautiful
But I wasnt gonna let you know that
Just yet

I kept my poker face
Hoping that one day I'd feel your embrace
So I let the other players show their hands
Only to fold

I ignored advice that Matthew told
and bided my time
So whilst I spoke in mime
I let you question my apparent
Lack of interest

But cogs were turning
And I was frozen
Often caught mid-sentence
By something you'd say
Be blown away
and sway
Closer towards you

In a crowded canteen
reminiscent of Notting Hill streets
Small talk and chit chat
Consolidated our friendship
A relationship with preformed foundations
That we didnt witness being built
We missed the first ribbon cutting

I aware of your ability to captivate
I hesitate in the presence of purity
I fuels my insecurity and I
Crack
Failing to enhance your experience of me

Some say
Less is more
I disagree
I share my thoughts
Throw them in your direction
Hoping that your olive complexion
Can absorb a physical compliment

You see, it's the little things I like about you
Your girly giggle
Hands on hips
A sneaky peek my way
But it the sound of your voice
Which removes all the noise
So all I can fear is a sweet angel
Speaking to me
with
such
Grace

We've entered a new season
Jude
Your the winter
Eyes like snow
Your delicate cirrus cloud lips
That deliver honesty and serenity
When blown your away
Im a storm chaser
Your the perfect storm
and nature's spoken

Beauty stands before me
You've raised the bar

And just so you know
I think you're stunning

I'll see you at second ribbon

x

[OsCKilO]

Hey Kev!



You Smell!!!!


Lol!!!

[Tony W]

Welcome aboard Kevin! Great lyrics!

[cuthbert]

Great mood piece you've made here, guys.

Kevin's words and vocal delivery and Tharek's music have created a nice visual, like in a film - funny how that can be done with no images. 

[Satchwood]

Very nice peaceful poetic piece - full of imagery !!! - nicely played and spoken!!!