Numb - original composition (version 2)

[Satchwood]

I dug up one of my old instrumentals and added in some keyboard bass, strings, and a tad of piano at the end.  I'm still not done with it.  So any helpful criticism is very welcome...

                                   Numb (version 2) by Tommy Satchwood

[Wiley]

Wow!! I don't know what else you could possibly add to make it any better!  It is beautiful as it stands!A testament to putting feelings in a song!!
PJ

[tafka]

that was just awesome Tommy.
faded out to just piano would be the icing on the cake.
but still fantastic as is

TJ.

[Satchwood]

Thank you for the comments PJ and TJ !!!  Much appreciated...  

i was actually heading that direction Tony (with a little piano), but kinda of turkey'd out and kept the piano really short; but i think that's a good idea and will work on a version 3 - thank you!

[Tangled Wires]

Melodic perfection here Tommy, everything fits just right. A wonderfully constructed composition and, as usual, fantastic playing!

[launched]

You always put great energy and emotion into your compositions - Always a treat!

I think this mixes well across the board.

My only "criticism" would be that it is too short. I did want more... 

Peace, bro!

Mark

[Ferryman_1957]

Beautiful, Tommy, great mood piece. Excellent guitar sounds and playing and agree with TJ, bring the piano in sooner and let's hear a bit more of it - feels like it is just going to get going with a new part to the song and it stops.

One thing to watch if you are still working on it - I think the combination of strings and keyboard bass gets a bit overpowering towards the end and is peaking a bit (about 2:14 to the piano). If you could dial back a bit of the bottom end that might help.

Cheers,

Nigel

[Glenn Mitchell]

Lots of great stuff going on here. Epic runs. emotion, power chords. I liked the trading guitars, harmonics and other contrasts. Good dynamics.
Comments? very little. Maybe pan the trading guitars 10% left and right to create an on-stage impression?

[Vanncad]

Very good Satch! The guitar work is amazing, and it's a very cool melody.

faded out to just piano would be the icing on the cake

- I agree with this statement as well.

[OsCKilO]

Sooooooo Awesome Satch!!!!!!

Question:- Is there a single not on that guitar that you dont use and know inside out?




Love it Tommy!





Vann would sound awesome singing on this.....


Peace

T(Osckilo)