Numb - original composition (version 2)

[The Gobi Desert Canoe Club]

Man I just love these bumps, it gives us relative newbies a chance to listen to some great music posted when we didn't even know what MBR was. Top notch.......Willie

[Covermark]

Hi Tommy, well you asked for some critics.

I think the song and the arrangement are good. The clean guitar in the begin of the song is played a bit "on the count" as you get what I mean. Overall I think when you should choose another rythm pattern instead of boom-tjak-boom-tjak it will come more alive.

Just my 2 cents

cheers

[tom r]

love the way the distorted guitar just soars above.... brilliant.

T