Let Him Cry by henwrench

Started by henwrench, November 25, 2009, 04:14:42 AM

henwrench



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        I write your name with your blood
        The letters are nine feet tall
        [soundclick]8392536[/soundclick]
            last one for a while...........
                                            henwrench
The job of the artist is to deepen the mystery - Francis Bacon

English by birth, Brummie by the Grace of God

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Covermark

Henwrench, I'd love to listen but this @$@$# link doesn't work. Cant you upload it on box.net ?

henwrench

Quote from: Covermark on November 25, 2009, 07:50:18 AMHenwrench, I'd love to listen but this @$@$# link doesn't work. Cant you upload it on box.net ?
Thanks for lettin' me know, had some trouble meself!
       It works well on www.soundclick.com/henwrench so in the meantime, if folks could check it out there and post back here, we at henwrench towers would be most appreciative. We apologise for the technical difficulties....

                                                   henwrench
The job of the artist is to deepen the mystery - Francis Bacon

English by birth, Brummie by the Grace of God

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Covermark

Lovely song. Did you play everything yourself ?

henwrench

yep. everything handcrafted by henwrench
The job of the artist is to deepen the mystery - Francis Bacon

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Wiley

This has a great feel to it!!  I really like the bass line.  Stands right out and has a great drive to it!.  Sounds like you got a lot of work into this!  Great job!

Glenn Mitchell

This is a really good song with interesting parts. The guitar has excellent tones. Bass is solid. The lyrics are original and interesting.
IMO the Vox needs more definition (You have a great voice) and seems to be overwhelmed by the instruments. The unique cymbal sound adds to the upper end and rhythm nicely but seems overly prominent to my ears. I wondered if bringing that back might fix both issues?
I hope you don't mind me throwing my humble 2 cents worth in. I know I always appreciate it but others may be offended.
Excellent song. Very creative guy.
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upsetminded

Yes!  This has got a real psychedelic feel in my opinion.  Which I really dig!
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Gritter

lovely psycho waltz...could use louder vocal mix...would love to make out your lyrics...I'm sure they are profoundly demented (which is good!)



I totally dig your style mang!

Tangled Wires

Agree with others that vocal could come up in the mix a bit, but that doesn't take away the fact that this is a wondefully crafted song. Really clever use of all instrumentation and am really intio that bass line!!

Great post!


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