please need some help with text / vox

[Covermark]

Hello,

A few years ago I made a raw conceptsong as you find below. In a way I'm not able to write / create good lyrics and melody.

While there is so much talent on the forum I would ask for some collab.

Anyone please ?

http://www.box.net/shared/3x3udcdfp9

[Oldrottenhead]

lots of scope for lyrics in this, am at work just now so wont have a chance til about monday to give it a go. do you have a topic or theme in mind that i could use to fit a lyric too.

ps great tune

[Covermark]

Well..... I made this song app 20 years ago. I was terribly in love with a woman. I had some text but if I would let it hear it to my wife now, she would be as jealous as she could hahaha. I would only have one black eye in a week haha.

[Oldrottenhead]

 ok covermark ive done a lyric with lead vox and two backing vox, hopefully the lyric is obscure enough that it wont upset your wife lol.

if you like i can post it at www.soundclick.com/nevermet

in the meantime i will post it on my skydrive here
http://cid-48716fda7dc89aeb.skydrive.live.com/self.aspx/.Public/get%20what%20you%20want.MP3

you can download it from here.
also i will put it on the mp3player but alas that will only work for a day or so.

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[OsCKilO]

Wow!!!!!!!!!


This Works Soooooooooooo Well!!!!!!!!!


Like something out of an 80's feel-good Movie!!!!



Awesome!!!!!


Love it!!!

[launched]

Love the music, Mark!! Very free flowing - Cool guitar too.

Jim - I'm envious of those backing vox. Very light and complimentary - I want to be able to do that!!

Great collab - I love it!

Later,

Mark

[Satchwood]

Cool guitar - cool vox - !!! - ORH you never cease to amaze me how you pop lyrics out of your.....mind like you do !!!

[Covermark]

ORH you amazed me! I think you sang it very good. Also the backing vocals are very nice to hear.

Also the text you've made is very good !

As I've written in my first post of this topic the music is only concept. If you could please give me some extra time I'm going to try to build up the song a little bit more.

Many many thanks. I'll come back later this week on this !!

Mark

[Oldrottenhead]

ive mailed the individual vox to you mark

[The Reverend 48]

ORH can you put a link that works I'd love to hear it!