I'm a loner but at least i'm never sober... (original)

[Crispy]

Hey guys and gals,

sorry I've been AWOL for a while but I lost interweb for a bit and had a few things goin on. But here's my second attempt that I deem worthy of your ear drums 

it's what I like to call an "anti-love song"
hope you guys like it and any comments and criticism is welcomed.
I'm a bit iffy about the vocals which I think I'll re-record, I'm still trying to develop a good mic technique. 

Thanks for listening!

Enjoy.

[launched]

Vocals are good. They work perfectly with this song.

Very well played and presented!! On a second listen right now.

Love it!!

Mark

[launched]

That rhythm guitar and the drums sound great!

[danieldesete]

That's a very efficient song. No boring moment in it, always something new poping in ! Second listening : Something Johnny Rotten I love in your voice !
well done
daniel

[Vanncad]

I love it Crispy!

Guitars and drums sound great. Love the title too!
Great raw sound.

Very cool tune.

 - Vann

[Wiley]

You got a really good jive going on here. The guitar might be just a tad to loud when your singing, but otherwise a great job!!  You can really reach those notes too!!

[Oldrottenhead]

i love this its really dynamic, i like where the vox sit in the mix, makes me think of maximo park  for some reason.

[trmunion]

Great!!! got that late 80's alt sound to me (Pixies) Ilove it.

[waynesan76]

Crispy, that was fantastic man. I love everything about this track. Some others have pointed out subtle likenesses to famous artists. (we all have our heroes that we learn from and build our style from) Like I said, the whole track is great, but I especially enjoyed the guitar solo. I could swear there's a hint of J Mascis buried in there somewhere...

Keep the recorder burning brother.

[Tony W]

I like it when the clutter on my desk bounces with the song. This has enough bass to really make my desk active! Great song overall.