Main Menu

Overheard

Started by neatnik66, October 19, 2009, 06:15:06 PM

neatnik66

Overheard 20 Aug 09
Time:
0:00
Volume:
50
0
Here's another one... more shameless pop! This is a draft that has yet to be refined, so the edges are a bit rougher than Forevermore.
Again, Micro BR drums, bass (Schecter five-string), acoustic guitar (Martin D28) with a bit of novice slide.
Thanks to all for the nice comments about Forevermore... very validating!
Thought I'd include the lyrics for this one.  They all came in one fairly short sitting, and I was quite happy with the way the identity/irony thing came together.  I've just realised that, for some reason, the backing vocals aren't in it.
Cheers,
Craig.

I didn't see you, when you walked in the room (Didn't know it was her)
Standing behind me, but just out of view (Listening to every word)
Well you weren't supposed to be there
And you sure weren't supposed to hear
The words that gave me away
And revealed what I've been trying to conceal
(And what I said was) She – ee, she is all I see
Now that you have overheard
You know that you are her, And that's the girl for me

I wanted to own up, but I was taking my time (Unsent texts in the phone)
Planned a confession, like I'd committed a crime (Hanging up on hello)
But I didn't have to do that
Coz you got to overhear
The secret I've kept to myself
And you caught me telling somebody else     (and what I said was...)

Gritter

Cool sound you got going on. Another great tune.

Vanncad

Catchy little tune here neatnik. It's got a great groove.

I love the slide guitar!

Keep it up.

 - Vann
It ain't pretty being easy.

Okay to Cover

OsCKilO

I was doing something else when I was Listening to this....

It was Like a signed/Pro Band being on in the back ground....




You are a Great talent bro!




Peace


T(Osckilo)
recorder
Boss BR-80
recorder
Boss Micro BR
OsCKilO websites:  weebly.com  MySpace  SoundClick  ReverbNation
OsCKilO Albums:  "Masks"  "Easy London"

Also on Twitter for Live stuff..
Divert and sublimate your anger and potentially virulent emotions to creative energy


Diego Ayala

Excellent tune Craig!  Love how you did your voicing and the instrumentation is very catchy!  Cool posting!!!

Tony W

This IS a catchy tune. I enjoyed it immensely.


recorder
Boss BR-800

recorder
Boss BR-80

recorder
Boss Micro BR

launched

A very good sound you have here. Really cool, like modern 60's pop.

Well produced - Quality results.

I like this!

Later,

Mark
"Now where did I put my stream of thought. But hey, fc*K it!!!!!!! -Mokbul"
recorder
Boss Micro BR
                                            
recorder
Audacity
                                                
recorder
Cubase

Song List
About Me
Ok to Cover

Oldrottenhead

fmgwabp
wow this is stunning i love the bluegrass feel of the acoustic guitar you must post a version with the backing vox on.
Quotemore shameless pop!
no man this is classic indy rock, absolutely love it.
whit goes oan in ma heid



Jemima's
Kite

The
Bunkbeds

Honker

Nevermet

Longhair
Tigers

Oldrottenhead
"In order to compose, all you need to do is remember a tune that nobody else has thought of."
- Robert Schumann

xicpanad

I love this too! It´s so perfectly played, such a cleen sound, catchy and it made me movemy head while listening! Great! Keep it up!
Cheers
Music is my life, life is my inspiration...

Satchwood

Just took a break and checked out this tune - I like it !!!  Cool guitar sounds & fx useage - plus A+ singing and lyrics!!!  i think the slide guitar with echo sounds great !!!
www.reverbnation.com/Satchwood
www.myspace.com/Satchwood
www.soundclick.com/Satchwood

"Sometimes It's Not How Fast You Move, But How Soon You Get There" - Bruce Lee

Tools: Kramer Strat, LP Deluxe, Avalon 12-string, Ibanez Bass, Yamaha Keyboard, Micro BR, Riffworks, Line 6 UX2, & a little Ableton & Audacity for grins :~)