New demo song

Started by Douglas, October 12, 2009, 02:08:54 PM

Douglas

New demo
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This tune is full of errors and the quality isn't very good, but it's supposed to give some idea of my new song that I'm working on. What do you think?

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Tangled Wires

Wonderful piece of music, and what a change when it goes heavy!!

Great playing, your guitar skills are top notch.

Just need to perhaps let the song slow done and quieten at the end so that it does not finish quite so abruptly, but apart from that i thought the quality sounded pretty good.

Are you going to put any vocals to this?


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OsCKilO

You Rock Hard Bro!

I love the way this builds!

Some Reverb on the drums would blend them in a bit with that awesome guitar....
I stay away from the MBR drums these days after we had a disagreement....

Great track!

Peace

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Ferryman_1957

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Great, lots of potential. The basic arpeggio on the clean guitar is excellent, very nice progression and gives you a great base to build on. Sounds good when it goes heavy. Give it some vox, spend a bit of time on the mix and give it a strong ending and you have a very good song here.

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Nigel

lexman

This is really cool,
Which effect is used for the metal part, love that sound.

Geir

Cool song !!!

Great skills ... and nice use of the whammy ...

Agree that you should get some vox on it!!
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Oh well ........

Douglas

Thanks for the feedback.

I have to think about vocals for this one. I do have a mic which I could you for singing, but unfortunately I don't have voice for it :)

I have only used Boss ME-50's guitar multi effects for this song and just custom settings. The whammy was set to change octave, which is quite clear in the end of the song... I love that tone.

Satchwood

CooL demo song Douglas - nice guitar work & guitar layers !!
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Wiley

Love the sound of the guitars.  Your off to a greatstart.

Bluesberry

I really like that clean guitar in the beginning, then it burst out into WOW, this is great, I really like big changes like that, them back to a combination of both. This has real potential. Lyrics would definately take this over the top.  You don't think you have the voice but you never know till you try.  Do a fade out for the ending or something like that.  I never thought I could sing untill I started singing on my songs and posting, slowly building up my confidence.  I guarantee you we wont laugh at your effort.

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