Worktitle: Lost in time

lexman · September 30, 2009, 04:43:52 AM

Hi BR users,

Didn't have much time the last weeks but last monday I took my BR and recorded something.
It's not the final version, some things I want to change.

- During intro the 'fading guitar' needs less volume so must be remastered.
- Some error during playing (not on paper was more jamming with my self)
- Add some solo guitar futher on in song.
- During outro I want also add some solo guitar parts. (and maybe make the outro longer)
- And when I have a good mic. I also need to do some vocals

Oh I low this some much, recording my own ideas but time is not on my side right now.
F*^&ing busy with working. (what crisis

, hopefully I don't hurt anyone with this)

Feel free for comments so I can learn more about creating music and get even more out of the BR.

Regards,
Alex

Satchwood · September 30, 2009, 09:11:10 AM

Luv the layers of guitar work here lexman!! Nice n heavy with great distortion fx !!! Reminds me a bit of Dream Theater - would luv to hear some soloing & vox added - great job!!!

Wiley · September 30, 2009, 03:01:12 PM

I think you are off to a really great start here! I'm with Satch the layers and different sounds really work in this. Good job!

Greeny · September 30, 2009, 04:17:42 PM

Some volume adjustments here and there, and a bit of work on the drums (less volume, more reverb?) would hone this a bit. But you are well on your way - the guitars sound great, and you've layered everything very nicely. Very good playing and composition.

OsCKilO · September 30, 2009, 05:28:29 PM

This is Great!

Tony W · September 30, 2009, 08:58:49 PM

I'm not qualified to comment on what you should do, but I am qualified enough to say this is going to kick ass when its completed.

lexman · October 01, 2009, 12:42:26 AM

Drum has indeed too much volume.
Thanks for the reverb tip, gonna try it.

lexman · October 01, 2009, 12:50:43 AM

Quote from: Satchwood on September 30, 2009, 09:11:10 AMLuv the layers of guitar work here lexman!! Nice n heavy with great distortion fx !!! Reminds me a bit of Dream Theater - would luv to hear some soloing & vox added - great job!!!

To be honoust, the intro is inspired by dream theater.
From maybe DT's best album Images & Words, pull me under.

Tangled Wires · October 01, 2009, 02:16:30 AM

Really well put together this, would love to hear it developed even further into a full song. Excellent playing throughout and has the makings of something really good with a few tweaks on levels etc.

Great post!!