Decay

[The Reverend 48]

Davo nearly missed this it is great
Well Done

[SdC]

Very good. Very.
Topically, it reminds me a bit of Radiohead "you do it to yourself", gave me the same kind of feeling... very close indeed.

[Blooby]

Very cool.  Nice dynamic shifts.  Question: has your friend heard the song?

Blooby

[Vanncad]

I'd love to hear that last chorus explode with drums, and repeat at least one more time.

I second that emotion.

This is a great tune Davo. You have a great voice. It reminds me of 54-40 (a damn find band BTW).
Can't wait to hear the finished version!

P.S. - I wrote a tune called "The Kettle and the Pot" which was my way of talking about the same issue. It's on my songlist (see link below) if you want to check it out.

 - Vann

[lg]

Top-Notch song, and production!
I love it! straight to the mp3 player...
But, as you mentioned you need to get some drums in there....
Bravo

LG

[Davo]

Very good. Very.
Topically, it reminds me a bit of Radiohead "you do it to yourself", gave me the same kind of feeling... very close indeed.

I love that song!  I wasnt thinking of that when I wrote this-I think I was in a Sonic Youth phase, but you know how influences come out in odd way.

[Davo]

Very cool.  Nice dynamic shifts.  Question: has your friend heard the song?

Blooby

He came to a party I played last summer-about a year ago where I played this on acoustic.  I didnt tell him it was about him but he knew right away.  He seemed quite embarrased-but this was nothing I hadnt pointed out to him before.

[Davo]

Top-Notch song, and production!
I love it! straight to the mp3 player...
But, as you mentioned you need to get some drums in there....
Bravo

LG

Thanks LG, thats quite a complement-Ive never had a song of mine on someone elses MP3 player!

[Oldrottenhead]

WOW!!!!

[guitarron]

I had one those kinds of friend-I can relate-sadly he's gone now
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=870588&content=music

this song is great-it 's message and vibe are right on
nice vox