New Song "Goodbye"

[gingertilly18]

hi guys, just finished this, its a song about my last year of college before me and all my friends and band members all went to different uni's so don't really see much of each other. the reason my summer (2007) went so fast was because i was run over  (my own fault!) and ended up in ICU for a few weeks, died was saved by the nurses then was on morphine for the pain  then i "walked the dog"  in bed while spaced out on morphine and fell out of bed!! then went to uni and here i am posting this for you!
hope you enjoy it 

michael

[OsCKilO]

Cool Lyrics!


Glad you are OK after your Close shave!

[fenderbender]

 gawwwd -what a lonesome song --feels so sad like ----

nice words tho'-very poetic --
here comes september -new start new hope -like waiting for the sun to shine -if you know what I mean---

this is the type of song that would grow on you
well done -------

[Geir]

Well done putting that experience into a song that makes one get into the emotions and feelings you must have had !!!

Great lyrics

[gingertilly18]

OMG after listening to it back my guitar sounds terrible!
it sounds out of tune! i will have to re do it when i get time, thanks for the responses!!

michael.

[gingertilly18]

being a drummer i have no idea which notes i should be playing over the chords but that bit sounded good when i was recording but it sounds really really bad hearing it back, the chords are.......... one min...........
A > C# > G > Bm

what notes can i play??

thanks for taking the time to listen!

michael

[Geir]

you could try theese:

A B C# D E F# G

i

[launched]

This isn't a bad song at all. Creative as hell. It needs a bit here and there, but the hardest part is over - Writing the song!!

Very good!!

Later,

Mark

[Saijinn Maas]

uh oh! Another "song removed" thread in the making???   

[OsCKilO]

uh oh! Another "song removed" thread in the making???  

Here it is