There Was a Time (still working on it)

[Blooby]

Really like the dreamy quality to this.  Everything is simple but fits together in a very (to quote Ferryman) elegant way.

Nice.

Blooby

[indierik]

Blooby, many thanks!!! You're a hell of a talent so that means a lot coming from you.

ORH, of course I'm always happy when you like my songs. Hey, if you want to give the vox a shot with this one I say go for it. It would be fun to do another collaboration together.

[Wiley]

This has come a long way.   I like simplicity also.  Basically cause I can't do fast. LOL  This just has that really dreamy quality.  Can't wait to hear the next step.
P.J.

[Bosko Schwartz]

Hey eRik,

This song is (still) fucking amazing.  And now even more so.  Did you slow the tempo, or am I imagining that?  The changes to the lead guitar are subtle but really make the song flow well.  I originally thought this song needed a change or two -- a bridge, or chorus, or something different from the chord progression that repeats throughout -- but now I don't think so.  There is enough variety with the lead melodies.  Plus, you could have different singing melodies which would sort of create different parts.  I am thinking one sung by a male, one by a female, like I said in the e-mail.

The feeling of this song is so beautiful and is almost so melodic to the point of getting teary-eyed.  Definitely goosebumps, if nothing else.  The vox are really going to make this song.  Even as it is now, it is just phenomenal.

The only little quibble I have is that the piano on the left sounds a little "off."  Before, you were playing along with the bass, but you changed it a bit.  It's not horrible, just sort of off.

But that's a tiny niggle.  I absolutely LOVE LOVE LOVE this song, man!!!

[Oldrottenhead]

i added a vox to this forgot to post a link
https://songcrafters.org/community/micro-br-b65/there-was-a-time-music-by-indierik-lyrics-and-vox-by-oldrottenhead/0/

[FuzzFace]

This is really great.  Very smooth.

Makes me want to get my act together.