heavy challenge by orh or how not to and why i should stick to singing

[Greeny (No longer active)]

The Kite has THREE guitarists now! Nice work James. Use your ear to follow those riffs / scales higher and lower on the neck to add some variation. You have the right feel for sure.

[Ferryman_1957]

Get some more effects Jim and keep practising what you have and you have invented a new guitar sound, just like Kevin Shields of MBV! I quite like this but then I like indie bands like Sonic Youth and MBV. it's a very different take and well done for doing something different.

Cheers,

Nigel

[Satchwood]

CooL raw feel on this piece - very live sounding!!  Dig the octone licks you repeat on this Jam - nice job James!!  Your starting to exercise those fingers of yours 

[Saijinn Maas]

Not bad ORH! Not bad at all! Your instincts are very good. Especially with phrasing. Although the number of notes you use a limited, you do appear to know when to repeat them and when to change he phrasing. You definitely well on your way! keep it up and you'll be a match for Dmann or Satch in no time!

[Davo]

Nowt wrong with this!

It's like the theme Tune to a U.S Cop show!   Cool!
T(Osckilo)

Ha I kinda picture and ambulance/fire show-the guitar sounds like a siren in a few parts.

And stop hating on your playing man!  Its not what notes you play-its how you play em!

[henwrench]

it's like kraftwerk got a guitarist... sublime

                                   henwrench

[Oldrottenhead]

gawd i need to hide my head in shame now that this has been bumped lmao.

[launched]

I thought it sounded fine and you were off to a great start. I think your MBR was telling you something when it temporarily went on the fritz:

"Get back behind the slab, dude!!!"

It's in your blood, Jim!!

Peace,

Mark

[Groundy]

Theres nothing wrong with that Jim, sounds great. well done Alex

[Tony W]

Jim, I actually learned something from this, so hanging your head in shame is a sad thing. I have a tendency to throw out note vomit when I'm trying something like this. You kept it simple and it was beyond listenable, it was actually pretty cool.

I would have squeezed in 17 frets worth of misplaced and poorly timed notes trying to add variety, and would have posted a disaster. Thanks for opening my eyes to new possibilities.