Original - November Fall

Started by danarm101, July 29, 2009, 06:50:55 AM

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Hi chaps,

Your comments spurred me on to complete another original.......tried to take on board some of the mixing comments from my last effort, so here goes.

Its another acoustic based effort called November Fall, i let you decide what its all about. Anyway, cheers again for the warm reception, let me know what you think.

Cheers,
Dan
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Greeny

Your acoustic tone and recording is immaculate - so clean and natural. There's a touch of Oasis in this, but it's an original of the highest quality. You're a VERY good and talented songwriter. Nice build towards the harmony and keyboard-embellished finale too. Wonderful stuff. You're in the right place for an audience who will appreciate work like this.

launched

I like it - It's real easy to get lost in a song like this. Quality playing and vocals. I agree that the build up with the keyboards works well here.

A great composition overall!!

Mark
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How good is this song!!! Agree with Greeny, there is an Oasis vibe to this song, which is a good thing!! Excellent playing and a strong vocal add to this, and that keyboard part fits perfectly. Already looking forward to hearing more from you!


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StevieM

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Quote from: Greeny on July 29, 2009, 07:11:24 AMWonderful stuff. You're in the right place for an audience who will appreciate work like this.

Definitely in the right place, but I should think this'd be appreciated just about anywhere.
Oasis mixed with David Bowie! Good combination!! Like this a lot. Can't wait to hear more.
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Great song writing, just a good song really well played.
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Facemask93

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I agree with Greeny on the guitar tone and recording being very natural , this is so difficult to achieve with acoustics , but also , i really like this track with it's simplicity and honesty , it's got such a live feel to it , you almost feel it's going to explode into a big production with orchestra , then your happy that it does'nt , it just builds nicely then
softens , all in all a bloody great song


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Now that is a very nice song indeed.

Bluesberry

So good, so very good.  How are you recording this acoustic?  Wonderful, what is your technique?  A very well written song.

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danarm101

Thanks all, wonderful comments.

Bluesberry - the acoustic is just recorded though the internal mic and with a vocal delay effect - on two tracks panned left and right........not sure if i have what you call a technique, my songs seem to follow a pretty rigid structure.......love acoustic stuff(plus im a crap electric player), just wish i had a voice like some of you guys. Although lyrics arent everything, i think you know you have a good song when your words work just as well in a poem form.

Anyway, thanks guys.

Dan
You can hear my tracks at http://www.carbonlogic.co.uk/profile/danarm101

For the best in modern prog rock, check out my big brothers site, http://www.cosmograf.co.uk/