camera by jemima's kite take 2

[Oldrottenhead]

ok we posted a rough version of this yesterday, here is take 2.

using greeny's original guitar an drum track i rerecorded the lead vox, this time with no effects (dry) as a result the lyrics are much clearer, whether the meaning is clearer , well i'm not sure wot its about myself lol. i then added a backing vox using the guitar effect pan + delay recording via the onboard mic to tracks 3 and 4 track 3 panned full left and track 4 panned full left to give it a stereo effect.

i then sent it to flash harry and this is how it came back.

[OsCKilO]

Cool Mix Jim!!!

Very strong Vocals!!!!

Peace

T(Osckilo)

[launched]

I like the dry vox. Sounds great. And Mike, really great job on the bass.  It's Going Straight to PiePod!

This is inspiration for me to crank out another one.

Mark

[lexman]

Hi,

Nice song, your nickname doesn't link me to this kind of music.
You have a great voice.

[Flash Harry]

I like the dry vox. Sounds great. And Mike, really great job on the bass.  It's Going Straight to PiePod!

This is inspiration for me to crank out another one.

Mark

LOL!

I don't want to be remembered for a catch phrase!

[Greeny]

You need to trademark it! In case Apple ever release a new i-pod cunningly disguised as a pork pie, lol

[hooper]

Great vocal! I like the way it's mostly dry but you added the echo on just the words 'Disagree' and 'know what it means'. Very effective!  And the harmony sounds so good. All on top of a very strong instrumental backing.

[Flash Harry]

Hooper!  Where did you get those comedy ears?

[hooper]

Hooper!  Where did you get those comedy ears?

Ya think maybe the Micky Mouse Club?   
Some ancient Pioneer headphones... my first decent cans.

[Oldrottenhead]

I like the way it's mostly dry but you added the echo on just the words 'Disagree'

so much for the lyrics being clearer. that line is "its all just a dream" lol back to the drawing board