Wake up while you can

[karl1171]

Possibly the first song I've ever written from a guitar riff

It might not sound like it now but I initially had some trouble singing what I'd written to fit! I managed it after a few tries!

[the physics teacher]

It's perfect, it must be Liverpool genes.🙂

[Blooby]

This is pop gold. Has an English Beat sort of feel to it. Really well done.

Downloaded to my beloved Songcrafters folder

Blooby

[StephenM]

Indeed a great track...thumping goodness.
I dig the organ...
Vocals are exc!
Fine fine songcrafting.

[Ray Brookes]

Very nice song and well constructed. Great vocal and production/arranging.

[ODH]

Really like that riff and a great vocal

[Johnbee]

Very enjoyable listen.  Many interesting things going on in this tune.

  John B

[hardlock]

A fine song all around! Dig how it's put together. Great listen.

[Farrell Jackson]

The organ sounds great. What are you using to get this fine sound? Your vocals and melody are pure gold. The bass has a cool thump that nails the bottom down with ease. The guitar riff keeps the song grounded in a good way. Great songwriting, recording and mix, Karl!

[Zoltan]

There's no waking up anymore. I've been woken up by my dogs every night after sleeping for just a few hours. That's dogs life!

I was going on a tangent and then something caught my ear. This song is really good. It's a bit rough in the edges, but damn if that isn't classic rock with an ageless bent then nothing is. Your vocals are honest and down to the point. Kinda making me envious. The rhythm guitar is right on the money.

I didn't even notice the organ until Mr. Farrell nicely pointed it out in his commentary. So you DID in fact have musical help. The same applies to the rest of the backing track. The way you've arranged the song makes it play at a nice clip. There's no dead air hanging around this song. It hits the spot.

Karl, you did great!