Eeny, Meeny, Miny, Moe

[Johnbee]

Second mix sounds cleaner.  Terrific rocker!  (Who's Moe?)

  John B

[hardlock]

You nailed it! Great piece of work!

[StephenM]

after reading all the comments about a 2nd mix (I don't see any other mix, which means it was probably put at the top and then deleted?)...

either way, whatever is at the top sounds aurably delicious to me.

all the talk about velocity strikes and sampling got me reaching for a box of Whitmans chocolate samplers real fast!  This sounds good while eating a cherry cordial!

The voice is so cool.  it is almost believeable but I also know this guy is playing us!
love the bass guitar...

yeah, you know how to produce... then the ending sounds like something from a movie that I would find a good bit unsettling

[SE]

Great stuff, just lots to like, driven along with the bass, great lyrics and vox too, cool stuff,  loved it!!

[kenny mac]

Excellent, probably one of my favourites from you.
Excellent rocking tune,sounds great in my car.
Well done.

[des0free]

Very nice.  Could easily have been a song in heavy rotation on the radio in the 80s. Or could be the soundtrack on a dark offshoot of the Breakfast club starring the irreverent "burn out" kid, the one who particularly pissed off the teacher supervising the weekend detention. 

[DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee]

Another fabulous song zoltan. It's got an 80's synth, rock vibe which I guess you were going for?
Kind of reminded me of some of the Gary numan tracks from the 70's/80's.
I like the idea for the basis of the song too. I wouldn't want to be a teenager again haha.
Great music and vocals are great.

[Bluesberry]

Fantastic bit of black art songcrafting.....smoothly menacing as Steve pointed out.....tape wounds...even the thought of your bass strings all bound and wound up in tape sounds menacing...im getting some menacing images forming in my brain as I listen .....I don't even want to know about the friend Mo....or maybe we need a song about this mysterious Mo character...what's his backstory? Do I even want that much information....yes, damnit I do...very effective and wonderful song