Be As the Water

Started by allysonmarie, February 10, 2024, 08:59:37 PM

allysonmarie

Be As the Water
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This is the song I entered into the NPR-Tiny Desk song contest for this year. The Youtube video recording of the song is about the same. I didn't think I would enter the contest for a 4th year, but I felt good about the message and had the time to put together a video entry. Seemed no reason not to.


No, the river rising won't mind the flood.
Like arms of the ocean, to the sky every open.
Given good and bad, it fills up in love.
Any and all and more than enough.

What lessons? To accept this life gave what you need.
The good and bad equal the meaningful between.
So be as the water ever open to the sky.
Forget how you got here. Forget you asked why.
Why? Why? Why? No reason at all.

Tomorrow is yesterday, over and done.
To be is all purpose could ever want.
However you got here is with a goodbye,
Sure as the loss as each moment here dies.

So be as the water ever open to the sky.
Forget how you got here. Forget you ask why.
Why? Why? No reason at all.

Pru

very nice song and well played along with good meaningful lyrics.

thetworegs

A good sentiment to the lyric and who doesn't like a good vocal and piano track
   
If Life is a dream then use your imagination

Farrell Jackson

Great words and message. The line "Be as the water, ever open to the sky" is a stand out to me. You have a very good voice and you sing this well. The piano accompaniment is excellent!
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Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?

TPB

I think you have a winner very nice
Tim
Life is not about the number of Breathes you take, it is the amount of times your breathe is taken away

DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee

Good luck if you do enter the contest. This sounds just great. I love the piano Melodie's, matching your great vocal range. Great playing and production.
I have 2 profiles on this site, (NOW COMBINED INTO ONE PROFILE PAGE)
 One is a musical partnership with Keith Allen, ( we record songs as "The Devil's Toupee").
The 2nd one is for my other musical projects and collaborations. (DarrenG)
Thanks for listening.

Ted

A well-crafted song. The harmonies, deployed so strategically, so sparingly. Very nice.
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Zoltan

Hugely enjoyable. For this i'm leaving out all my trademark mindless ramblings :)
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Pete C

Nice song, lovely piano and you have a great voice. Best of luck in the contest !

Pete
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Pipes

Hi there,

Lovely composition.

Great warm, attractive voice...loads of colour and richness there.

Congratulations on such an Impressive song.


Nick