You Caught Me Thinking About You

Started by Zoltan, February 06, 2024, 01:14:59 PM

Zoltan

You Caught Me Thinking About You
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Yesterday i was trying to do this thing for Stephen, but instead i ended up inventing this (Sorry Stephen, but the track didn't need any noodling :) It was great as is).

You Caught Me Thinking About You

V1
You caught me thinking about you
When everything was so new
When everything was so black and blue
and all that mattered was that your love was true

Pre-chorus
I can't hold you anymore
Your arms are colder than our bathroom floor

CH:
Yet i can still feel your burden
peeling down like an onion
If tears were true we'd be through
I'd be out like a cannonball

V2
I got a feeling about you
There's nothing you can do
When everything feels so wrong
And i feel so undone

Pre-chorus
I can't hold you anymore
Your eyes are colder than our bathroom floor

CH

You can see it in my eyes
I can feel it in my heart
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StephenM

hey man if I got you playing then I did a great thing... I really like this.. it sounds great...
the mix is amazing and clear... you are so good at that..

of course I really like the crazy lyrics.  The vocals make this so believable... I am glad to know that there are other folks with a kind of crazy vibe more toward mine... SC has more than a few and I feel fortunate to have found it... and hell... here you are man!
 
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         you can call me anything you like.  Just don't call me late for dinner

Johnbee

This is great, Zol.  Love the lyrics and overall production.  One of your best.  One tiny nit:  The fadeout doesn't work quite well for a song like this IMHO.  I'd go for a different ending.  I'd bet a super talented dude like you could think of a super conclusion  ;),but it's your tune.

:) John B

StephenM

man I missed that harmonica the first time... and that lead is so sweet... I think you found your love...

there was a TV show here for a lot of years, quite beloved.  Kramer.
 
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Ted

A lovely, well-produced song. With this:

Quote from: Zoltan on February 06, 2024, 01:14:59 PMYour arms are colder than our bathroom floor

The single greatest lyric ever written! Who will dare contradict me?

Check this out. To keep from missing out on songs, I created a private podcast feed for the latest Songcrafters songs, and I have it automatically add new songs to my news playlist. This song of yours was the first one to get added – right between the Washington Post and NPR:

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Ray Brookes

Lovely laid back and emotive song. Production is first class and great lyrics. I nearly missed that subtle harmonica phrase.
Ray Brookes

StephenM

Quote from: Ted on February 07, 2024, 05:40:36 AMThe single greatest lyric ever written! Who will dare contradict me?


that is what I love about this artist... if he sang this at a HS dance back in the 70's there would be engagement announcements taking place.... and then in the 80's the lyrics are on the screen and everyone is looking at themselves going wtf?

if you go back and study Zoltans lyrics, this sort of thing is not uncommon... which is another reason why I dig his music..
 
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thetworegs

Love that laid back melody and the lead is deliscious and I too love that line " your arms are colder than the bathroom floor" you must know my ex wife 
   
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Pete C

Love how there's always a witty side to your lyrics ! A damn good listen !

Pete
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Geir

Oh yeah. Love it. Such a great melody. Such romantic wurdz.

Great delivery.

And great guitar work here too.









The song vaguely reminds me of a cover I  once did.
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Oh well ........