Below The Southern Cross

Started by Ray Brookes, January 06, 2024, 07:10:50 AM

Ray Brookes

Below The Southern Cross
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I plough a lonely furrow, hum a tune
Drink whiskey straight late in the afternoon
Talk to myself when I'm cooking
Have a little dance 'cos no-one's looking
I catch the rain below the Southern Cross

I pull water from my well and chop the wood
The country where I was born has gone for good
Multiculturalism at work
Just another PC word 
Things changing fast below the Southern Cross

You wanted me to grow up and act my age
If I could act I'd leap upon the stage
I can hear your words right now
Within these walls they hang somehow
I sweat the sun below the Southern Cross

Your name inked on my arm; how you approved
Now it's just another tattoo I have to go and get removed

I amuse no-one and no-one amuses me
I'm using nothing and nothing's using me.
No social media – I'm disconnected
There's nothing here I'm expected
To do but make my peace below the Southern Cross.

I speak my words below the Southern Cross
Never let me wander just in case I might get lost
My time will come sooner or later
I'll walk beside my own Creator
We'll sit for a while below the Southern Cross

Things changing fast below the Southern Cross
Ray Brookes

Blooby


Next level songwriting. I have come to really look forward to your posts. Great arranging as well. Those harmonized clean lines caught my ear as well.

Blooby

Farrell Jackson

This is real super songwriting and production, Ray. The guitar flourishes are way cool. To top it off, you sing your words so well!
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Farrell Jackson


Rayon Vert


Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?

Hilary

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comme ci, comme ça

SE

Can't it more than a five thumb,s up, great songwriting, recording and  production.
Loved the listen!!!!
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hardlock

Yes, this is a fine piece of work. Arrangement, vocals, harmony, and that Santana-ish lead tone are all stellar!
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Those things we take for granted - when we're young and immature - will surely return to haunt us when we're old and insecure

thetworegs

Another  beauty Ray .... Go on put a bad one up for a change and show us your fallible  give us a little hope :D
   
If Life is a dream then use your imagination

DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee

Happy new year Ray. What a great new song from you for 2024. You just seem to get better and better.
I really like the variations throughout the song. Great vocals and lyrics. Impressive as always.
I have 2 profiles on this site, (NOW COMBINED INTO ONE PROFILE PAGE)
 One is a musical partnership with Keith Allen, ( we record songs as "The Devil's Toupee").
The 2nd one is for my other musical projects and collaborations. (DarrenG)
Thanks for listening.

StephenM

incredible story and I bet all too real for many... killer track with lots of wonderful musical treats not the least of which is the guitar work. 
a real gem here Ray.
 
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         you can call me anything you like.  Just don't call me late for dinner

Jarle

Fabulous songwriting and storytelling.
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