Every Single Moment Hurt - piano & voice

[allysonmarie]

I haven't mastered the track yet, but sharing anyway. I've had a rough week and have this song to reflect the moment's frustration. Things have got to go up from here.

Haunted by the first.
Give more blood than it's worth.
A worried heartbeat set to burst,
And every single moment hurts.

Have mercy! Take the rest away.
Tomorrow need not know the shame.
How my days live for the night.
The ice to a carving knife.
And there's no safer place.
This world I can't take.

I know happier life died at my birth.
It's this unspoken pain I serve.
All along, gathering nerve to breathe the flames.
You watch me burn.

As settled ashes, I'll return.
The never here at all I've earned.
The unspoken pain I serve.
How every single moment hurt.

Every single moment hurt.
The never here at all...
never here at all I've earned.

[launched]

I love this! By the way you mastered the track,so good!

[hardlock]

Clean piano, great vocal to fine lyrics! Very nice composition.

[Ron D Bowes]

Great voice. High emotion in this one. Hope things improve, but at least you have music as an outlet. Cool composition.

[Pru]

very emotive singing and captivating melody

[Johnbee]

I love the emotion you put in your tunes.  Your voice is fabulous.

  John B

[StephenM]

digging this one!  I have heard it 3 times so far!
I like the flow of the tempo... very very awesome

[Ray Brookes]

A splendid composition full of emotion and well performed.

[Farrell Jackson]

Your singing and piano playing are very good!

[the physics teacher]

What a good idea to share your rough exoerience in your music. And you did it so well.