I need to hear my angel sing once more

Started by thetworegs, December 24, 2023, 03:47:39 AM

thetworegs

I need to hear my angel sing
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I picked up my acoustic this morning and this one jumped out at me so I didn't argue I just pressed record.....
The wind howls and the rain beats against the door 
My heart bleeds out upon this floor
I need you close
I need you with me
I need to hear my Angel sing once more 

I want to fill my heart with a song that I believe
I 'll sacrifice my wealth at the door
But I need to hear my angel sing
I need to hear her once more 
I need to hear her once more

My days have been lonely
Lost on this lonely road
I have no friends
no lovers
I'm truly on my own
I need to hear your song

Break

The wind howls and the rain beats against the door 
My heart bleeds out upon this floor
I need you close
I need you with me
I need to hear my Angel sing once more 
I need to hear you once more
   
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T.C. Elliott

I love it when songs jump out and write themselves down. This has a little bit of a ragged edge that I think works very well with the lyric. The almost frenetic lead fits the mood of the lyric, too. And your vocal brings it all together very nicely. Going to the major at the end of the vocal phrase on the first two verses works so damn well.
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kenny mac

Wow what a song to jump out.
Robert plant vibes there.
Great vocal and nice acoustic work.
Love the lead in particular.  :P
Good stuff.
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Geir

Great song Trev.

Nice guitar work, but it's the vocals that stands out here for me. 

Well done
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Oh well ........

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Very nice number. Really enjoyed the listen! 8)
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Mike_S

Powerful song and great lyrics too. From the heart, glad you got it down in that live take. Great stuff.

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