This is not a Disco - ODH Original

Started by ODH, December 02, 2023, 10:03:21 AM

ODH

Not a disco
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This song came to me pretty much intact during the small hours of Monday morning. I managed to capture the lyrics ( the words, not the singing) and drum pattern without disturbing my wife.  It's actually the first original song with lyrics I've produced this year, which is shameful.

It's a song contrasting the complexity and confusion of life with its triviality.

There was going to be a guitar part but there wasn't space for one.

It came out of the idea of conflating two PiL song titles (This is not a love song and Death Disco) trying to capture the indie disco feel.

This is not a disco
You're not here to dance
Jeopardy and risk so
Be aware your circumstance

In this situation
In this rock and roll
Confusion and frustration
Losing your control

This is not a disco...

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This is not a lifetime
This is not a whole
A moment in the nighttime
A fissure in your soul

This is not an exit
This not the way
Make sense of the next bit
Go another day

This is not a disco...

—-

This is just a disco
This is just a disco
This is all a disco
We're all here to dance

Overdrive - Distortion - Hyperactivity
Yesterdays shatter, tomorrows don't matter

StephenM

oh yes man.
clever... and indeed I get the PIL thing.
I like the beats and the vibe of the song... the vocals work...
I for sure get what the song is about...
very creative.
 
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         you can call me anything you like.  Just don't call me late for dinner

Geir

Cool


Very creative and I appreciate the use of images in the lyrics.

Well done
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Oh well ........

Bluesberry

Love those PiL guys...brilliant stuff....as is this...dandy and a bit dark.....bouncy even.....well done indeed

Alternate Tunings: CAUTION: your fingers have to be in different places
 
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Pete C

That's cool Nick..would have had me up bopping in my pre-retirement from dancing days. A bit of a nod to PIL but essentially you.

Pete
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hardlock

Fun one! Good creativity on tones and vibe. "not a disco"? maybe EDM then? 8)
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Those things we take for granted - when we're young and immature - will surely return to haunt us when we're old and insecure

Johnbee

Energetic and haunting at the same time.  You could start a new genre with this.

 :) John B

TPB

Great and wild now I would like to hear part two This is A Disco LOL
Well done
Tim
Life is not about the number of Breathes you take, it is the amount of times your breathe is taken away

Zoltan

What can i say? We all have our pains. Trials & tribulations. There's no getting around it. It might not be Disco, but one of your foot is firmly planted in that genre. You're a punk i get that (and you're feeling lucky!), but at the sametime i know you invented new dance moves while doing this...

It's too groovy to suggest otherwise :)

Speaking of which. I get the PIL influence, but in a good way. When i first heard PIL i thought it was pure garbage. I still don't like most of the stuff they do, but i'll live.

Good one ODH!
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Reaper

A really energetic performance with great musicianship, don't think I could find that energy on a Monday morning. Good job.      Willie
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