Burning Rage

[thetworegs]

I wish I could get my head around the easy drummer programming but not as yet as I think if I could get some drums going on this one it would sound good ....anyway another song of Reg's burning desires or in this case rages ...thanks for listening

When I can see the moonlight breaking out from the rain
As the moon starts to shine
I remember how our love faded
I drown myself in wine
To hide myself from the pain
But all I find inside is theres no where hide from the rage
I can't hide from these jealous feelings inside
Why choose him over me
I can feel the rage build up inside me
Its sending me out of my crazy mind 

Break 

I know deep inside theres no more chances for us
I feel nothing inside but this hurt
When I see the moon I remember the  time
when our love was alive
But now all I feel is this rage inside me grow
All I remember is what you did to me
And how you left me alone
Taking everything that I had
Its turned into ball of rage inside
Sending me out of my crazy mind
Oh tell me
Why
Why
Thats question is always in my mind
Why
Oh Why
Thats the questions burning, burning in my mind
Tell me why
Why why
Why
That questions burning in my mind

[Johnbee]

Sounds very intense, Reg.  As you say yourself it would most definitely benefit from a beat.
If you're talking EZ Drummer by Toontrack I've been using it for years.  I don't know all of the little intricacies about version 3 yet (I'm working on it) but I might be able to help you with it in some way.  PM me if you'd like some tips.

  John B

[StephenM]

Trev, this is great.
I would love to hear you do the answer to this from her... that would be cool...

what would she say, what is the reason?  Does she even know.

this rocks, the guitars are cooking...

[Geir]

Yeah this rocks .... big time.  And a cleverly put together song it is as well. Like John I can hear this much bigger with a bigger arrangement. Drums, bass and mebbe an organ?

Anyway. Well done trev. You're on a roll. (Or should I say (no don't say it....) yes I think I will : a rock'n'roll  )

[StephenM]

Trev, I could try some drums for this... might take me a couple of days.... yeah, this kicks ass....if you get something else sooner, no worries.

um, I have been trying to crack the code on the drums on this for more than an hour.... ha... I must study this more... but I am not hopeful... but I am going to play with this alot more because I like challenges even if they get binned they make you better...

this song rocks...

[hardlock]

Killer song Trev.  

If Stephen doesn't come through on the drums, I'd love to give it a shot. Cheers!

[thetworegs]

It'll be great to hear what either or both of you can conger up

[hardlock]

Here's my take. Mix maybe off and timing has some issues it does bring the song to another level.

Don't know how garageband (or other pre-programmed) drum tracks work but without a set tempo, even live, slight timing variations can be a real challenge to follow accurately unless you know they're coming. Thanks for the challenge!

[thetworegs]

That's a cracking job you've done Ken thanks

[DarrenG / The Devil's Toupee]

Brilliant song trev,  and kens drum version makes it even better.