Run Away - original by des0free

Started by des0free, June 08, 2023, 04:46:11 PM

des0free

Run Away - original by des0free
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Three chords and sappy country-rock lyrics  ;D  I had the chorus two days ago but all attempted verses sounded bad. This morning a first verse line and melody came to mind and the rest came very quickly.  (edit: redid vocals, bass in chorus, and tweaked mix)

Chords: G, Cadd9, Dsus2

Verse 1
We were living and breathing in a small town
Just one or two friends were hanging around
Every Friday night we went to the bar
We saved up some money to buy an old car
But the truth of the story is life was a bore
And we both knew we wanted much more

Chorus
Let's go run away
I think we can find a way
To keep our love alive
Life was such a chore
We both needed more
To keep our love alive
I just want to say
Give us another day
Keep our love alive

Verse 2
Your sister got married in that small town
But now that life keeps dragging her down
We both knew we had to break free
And I really wanted to get down on one knee
That day I told you, come take my hand
Here's what we'll do, I've got a big plan

Chorus

Verse 3
It's been many years since we left that town
Since then our faces never had one frown
We have three kids and a white picket fence
We tell our old friends that life is the best
The truth of the story is life was a bore
We both knew we wanted much more

Chorus - repeat and fade


Tracks:
1 Vocal - AT4040 mic into CLA vocals plugin
1 Doubled Vocal (Chorus) into Waves Ultrapitch and CLA vocals
3 Electric Guitars - Fender Mustang P90 into Amplitube 5 Orange Tiny Terror Plugin
1 Fender Mustang Bass into Amplitube 5 Fender Bassman 300 Plugin
1 EZ Drummer 1.0
All recorded with Tascam 2x2HR USB into Reaper
Mixed and mastered with Focusrite FAST Eq, Compressor, and Limiter plugins
recorder
Reaper
recorder
Zoom R24
recorder
Boss Micro BR
  

Ron D Bowes

Light and breezy. Cool track. Nice crisp mix and a catchy song. Much enjoyed!

StephenM

3 chords of heavenly goodness! 

the drums really pop... solid rockin stuff... sort of like Mellencamp's Ken Aronoff

the guitars mix is to die for...it really fits this style of song... and the volume is just right!  Bravo on the guitars man..

Bass is solid like most rock songs... you would notice it if it wasn't there for sure but also nothing really stands out... but it absolutely is perfect here...

all the beautiful sound makes a sonic featherbed for your vocals to fall right into.... and that chourus does rock and is very catchy! 

my soul is dancing Doug!
 
recorder
Boss BR-1600
recorder
Zoom R24
         you can call me anything you like.  Just don't call me late for dinner

Pete C

You sure can write a catchy song !  Love it

Pete
recorder
Boss BR-600
 
recorder
Boss BR-800

Redler

Country pop/rock at its best! Nice sounding guitars and the chorus is sooo catchy! This works!
recorder
Korg Sound on Sound
Redler & Co   
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Audacity
      
recorder
Boss BR-80
recorder
Boss Micro BR

Bluesberry

This is so great...love the simplicity but yet deep groove..that chorus is killer..this is definitely hit material...recording is very well done

Alternate Tunings: CAUTION: your fingers have to be in different places
 
recorder
Boss Micro BR
recorder
Boss BR-80
recorder
Boss BR-1200
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iPad GarageBand
        

Ray Brookes

Nicely produced, Des. Sure is a nice catchy pop/country song. Sometimes 3 chords is all you need.
Ray Brookes

Farrell Jackson

I dig songs with three chords no matter the genre. This is easy going and happy sounding. All of it works for me Des!
recorder
Tascam DP-32
recorder
Fostex VF-160



Farrell Jackson


Rayon Vert


Test, test, one, two, three.....is this mic on?