Part of Your World

Started by Frank53, April 04, 2023, 01:24:25 PM

Frank53

Part of Your World
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Just a little upbeat pop song that I just finished.
Needs another good mix (or three) but it's close.

V1
I trip on every word
My meaning getting blurred
Yet you still pay attention
And every time I see you smile
And you talk with me a while
You ease my apprehension

V2
Then your laughter fills the air
At a joke I try to share
Though I messed up the punch line
Then I look into your eyes
They never fail to hypnotize
Are you throwing me a lifeline

Chorus
And all I want to do, is be part of your world
All I want to be, is part of your world

Solo

Bridge
I can't seem to tell you what my heart wants to say
It wants to know if you will be my girl
All I want to say, if I can only find a way
Is that I want to be part of your world

V3
I just don't know what to do
And you sense that feeling too
So you take my hand in your hand
And the world just melts away
It's just you and me today
Life is often unplanned

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thetworegs

I think it's a great recording or put it this way it sounds good ...
   
If Life is a dream then use your imagination

TPB

smooth nice to hear you play again radio ready nice
Tim
Life is not about the number of Breathes you take, it is the amount of times your breathe is taken away

Zoltan

Great melodies and vibe! Instantly appealling stuff that reminds me of the late 70's and early 80's. Easy going good time song.
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Ray Brookes

Cool pop song that rolls along very nicely and good lyrics. Those vocal harmonies work well on the chorus and I like the harmony guitars.
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Mike_S

Quote from: Zoltan on April 05, 2023, 08:46:57 AMGreat melodies and vibe! Instantly appealling stuff that reminds me of the late 70's and early 80's. Easy going good time song.

Lovely stuff Frank. Poppy maybe, but classy pop and yes I get that 70's 80's thing that Zoltan mentioned. Great sounds in here, love the guitar sounds.

Mike
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I dig this Frank! Fantastic vocal harmonies in the chorus and bridge, and love the solo section. Great bass lines too.

Well done!
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StephenM

This is fantastic!  It does have 70's pop shine but that is just fine with me... plus I love the idea of the lyrics... that is really a great theme! 
I always love your singing Frank... but that organ is really doing it for me here along with those backing vocals... its a wonderful tune!
 
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Redler

Superb stuff and agree with Zoltan about 70's/80's comparison.

Everything works nicely. Excellent job with harmonies, especially!

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SE

Cool 70,s 80,s vibe an excellent  recording.
Sounds like a strat with great harmonised vocals, cool.
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